Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

I rather eat marshmallows than peeps, but let Easter roll around and peeps are so fun to play with... Regardless of what age we are... Good poem. Nice form. Good author notes. Excellent work.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2013

Thank you Sunnilicious. Peep Peep.

Comment from Selina Stambi

Excellent

While friendly staff always keeps
It pleasant at pop'lar PEEPS. :) :) :)

What a smiley piece!

My kids used to say "pop'lar" when they were little.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2013

Thanks Sonali. That is a happy coincidence.. I'm smiling.

Comment from Sararb

Excellent

Wow! I would love to visit this Mall Of America. It seems to have everything. The little kiddies must love it there. That candy store seems like a real treat. Nice write I enjoyed reading it. Sararb :)

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2013

Thanks Sara. It is a Hugh tourist attraction.

Comment from Preston McWhorter

Excellent

Hi, Treischel,
This an excellent poem with good flow, rhyme and figurative language that paints a pleasant picture of peeps. I enjoyed this one.
Preston

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013

Thanks Again.

Comment from Ridley Williams

Excellent

Actually, what you do is take the PEEPS
and put one into a steaming mug of hot
chocolate and spice generously with
Schnapps. MMmmmm. Too bad it's so hot
outside. Great little ride to the candy
shop, thanks, Ridley

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013

Thanks Ridley. Never tried that with PEEPs but good idea.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Peeps for peeps ...but after sugar highs do we sleeps? What about the chocolate sonnet ... If you won't I'll get on it....sorry for my review ...look what excessive candy can do ...plus I haven't slept much and had ramen noodles for lunch.
God bless

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013

Thanks kiwi jenny. No problem. Understandable.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Sounds lovely! But we don't have one here in the UK, so I am safe for a while. I'm counting the calories! The sweets you mentioned, I don't know those either, but they do sound nice!! Love the photo! xsx Sandra

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013

Thanks Sandra,
Most movie theaters here carry the chewy fruit flavored Mike & Ike, and those very spicy Hot Tomalies..