Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I am enjoying your series because it immerses us in the Mall. I enjoyed your title and description of how the ride can make one feel. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2013

Thanks Joan. Are you home now?

reply by Joan E. on 30-Jul-2013

Yes--the only glitch was at LAX, where they had no gate for our plane. The trip was worth that small inconvenience. Thanks for thinking about me. Hugs- Joan

Comment from Sararb

Excellent

Does this mean if you are depressed a Nickelodeon ride will help you feel up? It would be a high ride. Good job with the 5-7-5 poem. Sararb

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2013

Thanks Sara, Thais exactly right.

Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT

Excellent

More of the memories you are afording me Mr T Think I am going make Ms Mermaid have a sense of humor collapse taking her reviews away hehehe lot said with little words great work as always my friend
TK

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2013

Thank you Tarnished. I know you'll figure out how to get a smile on her face after a bit.

Comment from Christof McTarnahan

Excellent

More MOA, your poems are making me homesick. I don't care too much for New Mexico...no ice fishing!!!Good little poem. I appreciate you sharing.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013

Thanks Christof. No lakes to speak of either. I lived in Colorado Springs for 5 years . Worked innPueblo. Been to Raton, Albuquerque, and Taos.

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

There is actually a whole mall series in the works. Well, that sounds like my type of fun. But you live next to the best mall in the USA. Can't wait to read more. Good photograph. Nice work.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013

Thanks Sunnilicious, yup, more to come.

Comment from Preston McWhorter

Excellent

Hi, Treischel,
Excellent 5-7-5 verse. Meets the line syllabication requirements of 5 syllable, 7 syllables, 5 syllables /3 lines respectively. Double entendre for high and low.
Preston

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013

Thanks Preston. Yup, not everyone caught that.

Comment from Capricorn30

Excellent

This looks like an enjoyable attraction;
An excursion to the highest point in an enormous shopping mall, providing a bird's eye view of the abundant shops;
Thank you for sharing a unique writing as we ride atop an enclosure so grand!

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013

Thanks Margaret. I guess the Park caught my Muse in the aMUSEment.

reply by Capricorn30 on 29-Jul-2013

LOL! Great pun in your reply--I like it!
Have a great day, Tom:)

Comment from gene roush

Excellent

This is good
Finding poetry at the Mall Of America -- you, my friend, are a true Romantic.
I've spent a few hours there and poetry would not be my expressive choice.
Thanks for sharing
Gene

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013

Thank you Gene. Well it is an aMUSEment park in a mall.

Comment from Mark Alan Trimeloni

Excellent

when you feel so low
a Nickelodeon ride
will take you up high

What a great way to look at things. I feel uplifted just reading your wonderful poem. Thank you.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013

Thank you Mark. Nothing better than being uplifted..

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Hi Tom, creatively penned and spot of syllables. Those kind of rides would make me turn green:)
Nicely done my friend - thanks for sharing it.
Maureen

"when you feel so low 5
a Nickelodeon ride 7
will take you up high" 5

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013

Thanks Maureen. No a place for fear of heights or motion sickness. Glad you liked it.