Comment from susand3022

Excellent

Hi Alexandra,
But how would Serius know already about the Hogshead? I mean, I'm sure that he'd found out eventually... but already?!? Wow! :)
I did find a typo:
...made Regulus (ask) his brother for help...

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020

Hi!! I'm loving reading all of your comments, thank you!!!
And I thought about that a lot actually before putting it in there. I feel like Sirius would have known about the Hog's Head because of the research they did with the Marauder's Map (with the tunnels). I also feel like Sirius would have been likely to hang out in there at some point, and would have known about Aberforth/the Dumbledore family because of his purebloodedness/growing up in that world

Comment from DanielEkine

Good

Beautifully written from the author. Great work.
""We need to think of a good prank to pull on him. That should make you feel better, right Pads?" Sirius smiled deviously, nodding. His eyes clouded over for a moment, and then lit up.

"Oh, I have the most perfect idea -"

CRACK!" my best part.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2013

Comment from JB Lynn

Excellent

This was a lot of fun to read. Would you believe I've never read fanfic before? I think you honored the general feel of the Harry Potter world throughout your piece, and I liked how you transitioned the two groups of characters together. Well done. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2013