As I Sit Here And Write To You
Words can say many things if said from the heart32 total reviews
Comment from Apryle Willis
This just cracked my heart wide open. Such raw beauty and keen recollection. I felt like I was there with you. Such sadness and beauty and love. I am truly sorry friend, Apryle :/
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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This just cracked my heart wide open. Such raw beauty and keen recollection. I felt like I was there with you. Such sadness and beauty and love. I am truly sorry friend, Apryle :/
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Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much Apryle
tk
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I mentioned your name in my contest entry earlier. :) Its called "friends have I none". Check it out if you get time. Apryle
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ill do it now hugs
Comment from krys123
Think you should write"but I play them (all) alone"it would just enhance the rhythm of the line. I particularly like that song "only the lonely"and if it's your piece and very well. But she's always with you by your side I think you can feel. Especially to children and grandchildren. I enjoyed the poem very much. It read and very easily and it was very well penned. You have a good one TK to have us.
AK
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Think you should write"but I play them (all) alone"it would just enhance the rhythm of the line. I particularly like that song "only the lonely"and if it's your piece and very well. But she's always with you by your side I think you can feel. Especially to children and grandchildren. I enjoyed the poem very much. It read and very easily and it was very well penned. You have a good one TK to have us.
AK
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Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Humm took a look at that line and think that I play with them alone has to stay I agree with your thinking 100% but think it would change the thought dont u think ?
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Yeah it would change the thought. So leave it.
AK
