As I Sit Here And Write To You
Words can say many things if said from the heart32 total reviews
Comment from ann marie mazz
the title caught my eye
I love titles
your words kept my attention
I adored the soft quiet pace and tone
it so adds to the beauty
however with that said
the beauty lies first within your words
they are heartfelt and reach the reader
emotion and illusion are two elements of poetry
this entry has met both those elements
I somehow fall short but I keep striving but I certainly know how to spot it when I see it and hear it
thank you for sharing your talent
all is well with this poetic entry
title theme words presentation and format
ann marie
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2013
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the title caught my eye
I love titles
your words kept my attention
I adored the soft quiet pace and tone
it so adds to the beauty
however with that said
the beauty lies first within your words
they are heartfelt and reach the reader
emotion and illusion are two elements of poetry
this entry has met both those elements
I somehow fall short but I keep striving but I certainly know how to spot it when I see it and hear it
thank you for sharing your talent
all is well with this poetic entry
title theme words presentation and format
ann marie
Comment Written 30-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2013
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thank you so very much ann marie for taking the time not only reading this work but for your comments as well
tk
Comment from DALLAS01
I'm not sure man was ever designed to endure grief. Your poem is haunting. It reflects an emptiness that is beyond our ability to fathom when all is right in our world. But when we grieve our loved ones we are breathing life into the memories that we need to hold dear. They deserve our grief. That is how I feel about my dad. he has been gone 13 years but I can still feel his presence. And it is in my sadness that I feel him the strongest.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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I'm not sure man was ever designed to endure grief. Your poem is haunting. It reflects an emptiness that is beyond our ability to fathom when all is right in our world. But when we grieve our loved ones we are breathing life into the memories that we need to hold dear. They deserve our grief. That is how I feel about my dad. he has been gone 13 years but I can still feel his presence. And it is in my sadness that I feel him the strongest.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH DALLAS THINK YOU MIGHT BE RIGHT IN WHAT YOU SAY LOST BOTH A WIFE AND MY SON WITHIN 4 YEARS AND STILL HAVE THAT FEELINGS OF WHY ME OR WHY THEM REALLY. NOW I THINK I WILL HAVE TO WORK ON MY PHONE CALL TO HEAVEN AND GET IT POSTED ANOTHER TEAR JERKER ALWAYS SEEM TO WRITE THOSE WHEN IT RAINING
TK
Comment from misscookie
Your words truly touched my hear from the first line to the last.
I don't know if your into music or not.
but this would make a hell of a blues or country song.
Thank yo for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2013
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Your words truly touched my hear from the first line to the last.
I don't know if your into music or not.
but this would make a hell of a blues or country song.
Thank yo for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2013
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thank you so very much The blues or country so different yet much the same You are the third person who said make some music with it have to find someone who could that Thanks again MSCO0KIE
TK
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Your very welcome, hope you can do something with those powerful words.
Comment from 9999pool
Yes, how can we forget them. When the memories float do not feel darn because she reminded us to think of them and feel happy.
Somehow they never died in our minds. Though we are lonely now, but have they not filled our hearts with joy - even now as we typed? Think that they never died, they just took leave to visit their in-laws perhaps, and then the pain and haunting will ease.
Only the lonely will feel lonely but with them in our hearts forevermore what loneliness can there be with an album full of those memories?
Try to shed a tear to show our love for them. This can be comforting too, if that helps.
Great write and well penned.
Cheerio, Ritchie.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2013
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Yes, how can we forget them. When the memories float do not feel darn because she reminded us to think of them and feel happy.
Somehow they never died in our minds. Though we are lonely now, but have they not filled our hearts with joy - even now as we typed? Think that they never died, they just took leave to visit their in-laws perhaps, and then the pain and haunting will ease.
Only the lonely will feel lonely but with them in our hearts forevermore what loneliness can there be with an album full of those memories?
Try to shed a tear to show our love for them. This can be comforting too, if that helps.
Great write and well penned.
Cheerio, Ritchie.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2013
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thank you very much Ritchie
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Welcome, Mr. Knight.
Time to polish the tarnished armor and learn how to see your happy reflection in that polished shining armor - do it for your wife at least. Smiles.
Best, Ritchie.
Comment from Pili Pubul
Well you did a superb poem, I love the simplicity of how the images roll down with imagery and emotion of what it was but is no more, but the memories remain. Great choice of song. Love it. Hugs. Pili
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Well you did a superb poem, I love the simplicity of how the images roll down with imagery and emotion of what it was but is no more, but the memories remain. Great choice of song. Love it. Hugs. Pili
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Thank you so very much Pili !!! and for your cornucopia of stars also !!
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You are very welcomeKnight. Pili
Comment from cvcopac
The speaker sits at his keyboard feeling lonely and starts to type his feelings. His memories of his departed wife escape to the keyboard but does little to relieve him of his loneliness. Good rhyming quatrains. Kenny
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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The speaker sits at his keyboard feeling lonely and starts to type his feelings. His memories of his departed wife escape to the keyboard but does little to relieve him of his loneliness. Good rhyming quatrains. Kenny
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Thank you so very much for reading and your kind comments
TK
Comment from Jackarrie
This is a truly wonderful poem, I enjoyed it from start to finish, so well written and it flowed so well, rhymed well, it told a story of a happy times and the sadness of loosing your loved one. I can imagine so many identifying with it.
All I have are memories now
Of your smile and your kiss
Really never knew how much
Your loving I would miss
On this lonely keyboard
I am typing lonely words
Echoing voices and visions
That once I saw and heard
Beautiful well done Mary
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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This is a truly wonderful poem, I enjoyed it from start to finish, so well written and it flowed so well, rhymed well, it told a story of a happy times and the sadness of loosing your loved one. I can imagine so many identifying with it.
All I have are memories now
Of your smile and your kiss
Really never knew how much
Your loving I would miss
On this lonely keyboard
I am typing lonely words
Echoing voices and visions
That once I saw and heard
Beautiful well done Mary
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH JACKARRIE
TK
Comment from nomi338
What a perfect song choice to highlight the excellent ode to a no longer present loved one. It is both sad and a little funny to do the things you talked about doing in the future, having to look at the empty space where the missing loved one was supposed to be. This is a very sad and heartbreaking poem. Very good work T.K.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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What a perfect song choice to highlight the excellent ode to a no longer present loved one. It is both sad and a little funny to do the things you talked about doing in the future, having to look at the empty space where the missing loved one was supposed to be. This is a very sad and heartbreaking poem. Very good work T.K.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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AWE THANK YOU VERY MUCH NOMI MUST HAVE HAD A CASE OF THE BLUES WHEN WRITING THIS ONE
TK
Comment from justmarly
love the sung. Like to know how to do it. The poem Is lovely. Like these >First words of our children
The love of their mother too
Just seem to echo in my mind
As I sit here and write to you
Funny how the memories
Of such a distant past
Seem to always haunt me
Damn, time has gone so fast
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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love the sung. Like to know how to do it. The poem Is lovely. Like these >First words of our children
The love of their mother too
Just seem to echo in my mind
As I sit here and write to you
Funny how the memories
Of such a distant past
Seem to always haunt me
Damn, time has gone so fast
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much JM If you go to you tube pick the song you want to use hit the share button on the bottom of the video then hit embedded copy then paste it to the authors comments BINGO YOU HAVE DONE IT !!
TK
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Thank you so much and you keep up the good work. JM
Comment from fastdigits
A beautiful writing of love full of warmth
and poignant thoughts as they spiral down
the screen slowly whispering a tale of
love and devotion on a wonderful ride
on life's road as you bring down memories
from the attic of the past.
Well done
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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A beautiful writing of love full of warmth
and poignant thoughts as they spiral down
the screen slowly whispering a tale of
love and devotion on a wonderful ride
on life's road as you bring down memories
from the attic of the past.
Well done
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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WOW THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE MANY STARS AND YOUR KIND WORDS THINK YOU SHOULD USE THE WORDS YOU WROTE IN YOUR OWN PROSE
THANKS AGAIN
TK
