Karma
Look Out, it Bites...36 total reviews
Comment from Righteous Riter
The writer stays consistent with the aabb rhyme scheme. The writer does not force the rhymes which leads to a smooth flow. The photo captures my eye but the words hold my attention to the end. Good job.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013
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The writer stays consistent with the aabb rhyme scheme. The writer does not force the rhymes which leads to a smooth flow. The photo captures my eye but the words hold my attention to the end. Good job.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013
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Thanks very much.
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
"Attack of major of munchies seemed to further fuel this drama
CONSIDER:
"An attack of major munchies seemed to further fuel this drama
With a humorous dialogue and unique plot, the poem's couplets and 15 beats/line are well suited to the work.
Regards:
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013
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"Attack of major of munchies seemed to further fuel this drama
CONSIDER:
"An attack of major munchies seemed to further fuel this drama
With a humorous dialogue and unique plot, the poem's couplets and 15 beats/line are well suited to the work.
Regards:
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013
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Many thanks. I'll take a look at that pesky line. I believe it WAS one that was giving me trouble due to the abrupt word at the start.
Cheers P
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Dear C: No problem.
Hugs: Steve C
PS:I wrote a bedtime children's poem in 2 parts about a Con sid er able Mr. Brown.
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Dear P: Well deserved effort. I've written poetry for 45 years and still love it. I tried juggling but am not good at it...ah maybe a poem will do. In any event have you reviewed my 2 bedtime children's poems..'Con sid er able Mr. Brown Parts 1 and 2, and 'The Littlest Christmas Tree'? Much appreciated.
Hugs: Steve C
Comment from eafournier
Awesome! I love this poem. Its so creative and humorous. The picture you chose and the color you selected are perfect, as is your understanding of Ganja.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013
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Awesome! I love this poem. Its so creative and humorous. The picture you chose and the color you selected are perfect, as is your understanding of Ganja.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013
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LOL Thanks so much. I love this review. Thanks for stopping by with a sixer.
Much appreciated. Cheers P
Comment from Gary D. Hardy
That's the Karma I would really run from. LOL! Great job with this well written short. Great moral to this story: Karma is only as good as the deed! The artwork was wonderful and added to the drama of the piece.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013
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That's the Karma I would really run from. LOL! Great job with this well written short. Great moral to this story: Karma is only as good as the deed! The artwork was wonderful and added to the drama of the piece.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013
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Thanks Gary, much appreciate your thoughtful comments.
Cheers P
xo
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It was indeed my pleasure!
Comment from ronnie k
Excellent what a circle, you turnly sent around what went around, lol. A wonderful flowing one deep breath poem. The weed gave hunger to the always hunger beast.
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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013
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Excellent what a circle, you turnly sent around what went around, lol. A wonderful flowing one deep breath poem. The weed gave hunger to the always hunger beast.
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Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013
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Thanks ronnie, much appreciate you stopping by.
cheers p
Comment from steevie
This was absolutely brilliant! I loved every word. You are back on top, my friend with a rhyme so sublime.
Good to see you back on here ... you've been away. We were worried sick, no phone calls, no letters, not even a smoke signal to say that you were okay ... LOL
good on ya, mate!
stevo out
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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013
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This was absolutely brilliant! I loved every word. You are back on top, my friend with a rhyme so sublime.
Good to see you back on here ... you've been away. We were worried sick, no phone calls, no letters, not even a smoke signal to say that you were okay ... LOL
good on ya, mate!
stevo out
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Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013
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Awww Steven, thanks so much.
Hugs P
PS Please don't be worried...I've been bound and gagged for days...and I LOVE it.
Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
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Peester
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I hope they used nylon rope ... very soft on the wrists ... Ahem, so they say LOL
Well, you're probably busy Fifty Shading so I'll let you go ... Pee
stevo out
