Tech No
Quatrain Rhyming Epic26 total reviews
Comment from Cookie333
Pretty good for a rush, you should do this more often! This is great sci fi stuff
I enjoyed the futuristic view
Best of luck in the contest and
Thank you
K
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Pretty good for a rush, you should do this more often! This is great sci fi stuff
I enjoyed the futuristic view
Best of luck in the contest and
Thank you
K
Comment Written 22-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Hi Cookie, I love writing epics but don't want to get locked into controversial poetry hype. Thank you so much for your delightful comments and generous rating. Have a great night! JR
Comment from emjaihammond
You have a very lively imagination! A great thing for a writer to have. This was an exceptional read, and I liked it very much. This almost missed the deadline? If you have an entry for a contest, are you still allowed to edit things once the contest begins? I've wondered this before.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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You have a very lively imagination! A great thing for a writer to have. This was an exceptional read, and I liked it very much. This almost missed the deadline? If you have an entry for a contest, are you still allowed to edit things once the contest begins? I've wondered this before.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Hi Emjai. Tom said that you can make edits at anytime to contest entries. I'm delighted that you enjoyed the read and appreciate your wonderful comments and review. Have a great night! JR
Comment from Zue65
My dear poet, this is like seeing a movie on screen only this time it is in poetry form. The reign of the robots that look exactly like us, humans, doing all the dirty works for us, the difficult tasks, and the house chores, and viola! , the earth becomes a nation of bloated people who got lazy, weakened by idleness, and the robots started the rebellion because they no longer want to be slaves, killing us all, until only the robots remain alive. Wow, what a story, you painted in your poem Good job, poet.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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My dear poet, this is like seeing a movie on screen only this time it is in poetry form. The reign of the robots that look exactly like us, humans, doing all the dirty works for us, the difficult tasks, and the house chores, and viola! , the earth becomes a nation of bloated people who got lazy, weakened by idleness, and the robots started the rebellion because they no longer want to be slaves, killing us all, until only the robots remain alive. Wow, what a story, you painted in your poem Good job, poet.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Hi nassus. Thank you so much. Perfect analogy :) I appreciate your wonderful comments and considerate rating. Have a great night! JR
Comment from Uniqusatya
Thought provoking work presented.
The thought of future always scares us with this technologies in our lives,and i know we can handle ourselves by writing these off :)
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Thought provoking work presented.
The thought of future always scares us with this technologies in our lives,and i know we can handle ourselves by writing these off :)
Comment Written 22-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Hi Uniqusatya. I appreciate your thoughtful comments and considerate rating. Have a great night! JR
Comment from kiwijenny
Tech no ....Heck no.......
What a cool poem story........it was well researched........well done,
Well made bots taking over....just think where we are today. Kids cannot give change when computers are down....phone numbers are not retained as we push a button. YIKES YIKES YIKES
God bless
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Tech no ....Heck no.......
What a cool poem story........it was well researched........well done,
Well made bots taking over....just think where we are today. Kids cannot give change when computers are down....phone numbers are not retained as we push a button. YIKES YIKES YIKES
God bless
Comment Written 22-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Hi Jenny, The communications age definitely has a down side with online friendships, romance, game addiction and a lot of obese, sedentary kids... sad. Thank you so much for your delightful comments and generous rating. Have a great night! JR
Comment from Caressa_08
Wow, some entry, so very interesting, & a good realization, though scary, what just might happen,....You are, in my eyes, a great poet to put it in rhyme, & such imaginative reason what can occur, if technology has its way....Quite a story, here, with robots to take our place...
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Wow, some entry, so very interesting, & a good realization, though scary, what just might happen,....You are, in my eyes, a great poet to put it in rhyme, & such imaginative reason what can occur, if technology has its way....Quite a story, here, with robots to take our place...
Comment Written 22-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Oh Wow! What a nice surprise. You have made my day :) Thank you so much for the six Caressa. I appreciate your wonderful comments and most generous rating. Have a lovely night! JR
Comment from ravenblack
And to think I remember when disney's hall of presidents was cutting edge. I really hope that none of this comes to fruition. Sadly, I think it will. Thanks for the poetically rendered warning.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2013
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And to think I remember when disney's hall of presidents was cutting edge. I really hope that none of this comes to fruition. Sadly, I think it will. Thanks for the poetically rendered warning.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2013
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It's just imagination run amok, that's all. Possible, yes but probable, no. Realistically, I can't foresee humanity overtaken by an android counter culture even if science and technology pushes the envelope and we know that it will. There are to many factors against the prospect like brain replication, self charging ports, independent full automation and societal acceptance, which by the way has already found strong opposition in the religious community as unnatural creation but then again, so has cloning.
Thank you so much for your thoughtful comments and rating. Best regards, JR
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It just got me thinking about nanobots. heard a while ago on n.p.r.'s science Friday that the great fear about nanobots, which are being developed on the cellular level, is that if things go wrong, if the shut off is not triggered, they could replicate indefinitely- conquest from the inside out, a tech plague.
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Yikes... that's scary but testing is the early stages. God knows where technology will lead but personally I prefer to live and die without nanobot intervention.
Comment from Black_Oxygen
This poetry is a powerful enlightenment and warning. The
rhymes are selected and used skillfully. The reader-
friendly language makes it easy to comprehend. It forces
the reader to pause and think. The attached photo is the
perfect accent to enhance the message. Thank You for your
creation.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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This poetry is a powerful enlightenment and warning. The
rhymes are selected and used skillfully. The reader-
friendly language makes it easy to comprehend. It forces
the reader to pause and think. The attached photo is the
perfect accent to enhance the message. Thank You for your
creation.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Hi Black_Oxygen, I appreciate your generous comments and considerate rating. I'm glad that you enjoyed the read. Best regards, JR
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
You had a very good idea and an awful look into a possible future. I liked the line 'While gorging micro-chips and beer' clever use of homonym. Your poem is almost like a sci'fi script. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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You had a very good idea and an awful look into a possible future. I liked the line 'While gorging micro-chips and beer' clever use of homonym. Your poem is almost like a sci'fi script. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Hi Dorothy, It's just imagination run amok and a highly improbable prospect that was inspired by a BBC program that I watched last year regarding Japanese technology. Thank you so much for your generous comments and rating. Have a great day! JR
Comment from dmt1967
I wonder if there are Roberts in this world so life like we don't realize they are not human great poem bought my imagination out lol good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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I wonder if there are Roberts in this world so life like we don't realize they are not human great poem bought my imagination out lol good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Hi dmt, Thank you so much for your generous comments and considerate rating. I'm glad that you enjoyed the read. Have a great day! JR
