Creepy Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Obnoxious Odors"A touch of Fear
8 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
You found the perfect picture and followed the form precisely. I wondered what inspired the subject... lol I think you know I am enamored with alliteration--well done! Joan
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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You found the perfect picture and followed the form precisely. I wondered what inspired the subject... lol I think you know I am enamored with alliteration--well done! Joan
Comment Written 22-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Thank you Joan. Just popped into my silly head, so I followed my Muse.
Comment from 9999pool
Great 5A write in good alliteration about obnoxious odors smelling so startling.
Our noses whiff, wondered and warranted a search of this pungent smell.
Great write and well penned.
cheerio, Ritchie.
Have a great week ahead.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Great 5A write in good alliteration about obnoxious odors smelling so startling.
Our noses whiff, wondered and warranted a search of this pungent smell.
Great write and well penned.
cheerio, Ritchie.
Have a great week ahead.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Thank you Ritchie.
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Welcome Tom.
Have a great week ahead.
Cheerio, Ritchie.
Comment from sunnilicious
It must of been that breakfast. Good alliteration running in every line. Well thought out. Creative visuals for a taboo subject. Good work.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2013
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It must of been that breakfast. Good alliteration running in every line. Well thought out. Creative visuals for a taboo subject. Good work.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2013
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Thanks your, sunnilicious. Could have been.
Comment from ravenblack
So just how did you get a pair of my shoes? Your 5A stinks. An odiferous oration ripe-rendered so succinctly. Send me back my shoes
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2013
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So just how did you get a pair of my shoes? Your 5A stinks. An odiferous oration ripe-rendered so succinctly. Send me back my shoes
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2013
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Thank you Ravenblack,. Hah, you found out!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL, Treischel, that is so funny! I haven't heard of a 5a poem, it would be quite a challenge! Sorry I haven't reviewed much lately, I am not getting as much free time these days, we are still working on our 'new' home, trying to put our own foot print on it. Hope to be back soon! xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2013
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LOL, Treischel, that is so funny! I haven't heard of a 5a poem, it would be quite a challenge! Sorry I haven't reviewed much lately, I am not getting as much free time these days, we are still working on our 'new' home, trying to put our own foot print on it. Hope to be back soon! xsx Sandra
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2013
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Thank you Sandra. Good to hear from you. Hope you getting settled back in England OK
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Treischel,
This is excellent 5A poetry. It meets the 5 syllable/3 line require with each word in a line being alliterate. It has powerful imagery. In other words this poem stinks.
Preston
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2013
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Hi, Treischel,
This is excellent 5A poetry. It meets the 5 syllable/3 line require with each word in a line being alliterate. It has powerful imagery. In other words this poem stinks.
Preston
Comment Written 20-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2013
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Thanks Prestion. Mission accomplished.
Comment from robina1978
Excellent photo to complement this little poem. A nice 5 A one that I can relate to, Sometimes life stinks. Winds that come out as well:)
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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Excellent photo to complement this little poem. A nice 5 A one that I can relate to, Sometimes life stinks. Winds that come out as well:)
Comment Written 20-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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Thanks you Ine, have a great weekend.
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welcome
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Comment from jadapenn
Lol, this was precious. I'd say the form is rather difficult when you have to make perfect sense using alliteration. And so few syllables! You did a wonderful job Treischel and I enjoyed the poem. Picture is perfect to round your work off. luv jada
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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Lol, this was precious. I'd say the form is rather difficult when you have to make perfect sense using alliteration. And so few syllables! You did a wonderful job Treischel and I enjoyed the poem. Picture is perfect to round your work off. luv jada
Comment Written 20-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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Thank you Jada. I appreciate your comments and encouragement.
