Geoff's Book Of Poultry
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "The Ode For A Toad"My Book Of Funny Poems and Stories.
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Comment from judiverse
Great ending for this. I love limericks and your format for this is excellent. Great rhyme. Sometimes we gain weight despite our best efforts. It sounds like you kept trying. Good to see something from you again. judi
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Great ending for this. I love limericks and your format for this is excellent. Great rhyme. Sometimes we gain weight despite our best efforts. It sounds like you kept trying. Good to see something from you again. judi
Comment Written 27-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Thanks for coming by. Yeah well when I had all that weight loss a year or so ago I thoughyt I was doing good but it was the undiagnosed Coeliac disease not getting Nutrition and food just going straight through to the bowels.Not leaving site just going FREE on Pinny2 ok.
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from JudyE
That's a clever and enjoyable limerick and rattles along nicely. I do hope your friends didn't really say that about you. Some of us put on weight way too easily.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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That's a clever and enjoyable limerick and rattles along nicely. I do hope your friends didn't really say that about you. Some of us put on weight way too easily.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Yeah well I did have the advantage I could get it off as easy as get it on. These days on Coeliac it is a battle with the Type2 as well. Thanks for the lovely review.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a really amusing ode. Very pleasant to read. The only thing I would change would be "still" instead of "but", which is more logical I feel. Hope the contest went well.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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This is a really amusing ode. Very pleasant to read. The only thing I would change would be "still" instead of "but", which is more logical I feel. Hope the contest went well.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Very old contest did not do any good. Thanks for coming by will look at your suggestion. Using up some funny money before I leave the place. Not sure we have met before fan me on Pinny2 (FREE ACCOUNT can't review but can read and message any errors or what I think.) so we can keep in touch when the paid accounts close Mid November.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
A limerick with biographical content, wow! I am thinking it has some themes of weight loss, disappointment at not meeting expectations, and a label that might not have been helpful at all. However, a reader could also take this with just a humorous slant. Thanks for posting, or re-posting, as the case may be.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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A limerick with biographical content, wow! I am thinking it has some themes of weight loss, disappointment at not meeting expectations, and a label that might not have been helpful at all. However, a reader could also take this with just a humorous slant. Thanks for posting, or re-posting, as the case may be.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Thanks Crystie, funny how this last little fling to use up funny money before I go has stirred up some new contacts. Appreciate the lovely review.
Comment from Cindy Warren
I take it this young man only fasted while he was asleep. What to do with him when all his clothes were too tight? He may need the 'wide load' sign to cover him up! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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I take it this young man only fasted while he was asleep. What to do with him when all his clothes were too tight? He may need the 'wide load' sign to cover him up! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Hi Cindy ancient contest, no mo. Thanks for coming along this is about me. Since those days I lost a lot of weight but only because of undiagnosed Coeliac (Celiac in Amerca) I have written a new Ramble about it recently. Just using up some funny money as I am leaving FS real soon. I hav e set up a FREE account to keep an eye on everyone look for Pinny2
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Very funny!
What happens when one over indulges into food stuffs.
Know this is older, but would be curious as to how to performed in this contest?
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Very funny!
What happens when one over indulges into food stuffs.
Know this is older, but would be curious as to how to performed in this contest?
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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I don't think I did any good if it was a contest. Been ages since I posted it. Thanks mate.
Comment from Delahay
This is more of a limerick than the other poems of yours I have read. It is still as humorous as your others. You have a talent for humor.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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This is more of a limerick than the other poems of yours I have read. It is still as humorous as your others. You have a talent for humor.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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Thanks this is actually about ME. Mum and I did this when I was a little fat fella. Still fat but a lot older now thanks for looking at some others in the collection.
Comment from 22allgood
Great little poem. I like the way it is easy to read and flows well. I don't think it needs work. It is short and funny.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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Great little poem. I like the way it is easy to read and flows well. I don't think it needs work. It is short and funny.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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Glad you are getting into some of the old stuff. Did you see I wrote a new note on the front of my profile does that notify my fans and stuff?
Comment from GaryCecil
I think this was a very cool poem! It was humorous and interesting to me.
He fasted at night
But his clothes grew too tight.
HAHA Great ^^
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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I think this was a very cool poem! It was humorous and interesting to me.
He fasted at night
But his clothes grew too tight.
HAHA Great ^^
Comment Written 23-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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Glad you liked it; thanks for the review
Comment from donette1914
This is a sad poem of ones over weight, there is a real person underneath and properly is the kindest person you will ever known well done
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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This is a sad poem of ones over weight, there is a real person underneath and properly is the kindest person you will ever known well done
Comment Written 23-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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Different angle and you are right I have been misunderstood all my life- except by my wife...hey a rhyme. Thanks.
