Geoff's Book Of Poultry
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "The Ode For A Toad"My Book Of Funny Poems and Stories.
28 total reviews
Comment from Ben Colder
LOL. No doubt he was my friend. I was thinking about the toad and the motor car. Something we would read as a child. Thanks for sharing. Best to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
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LOL. No doubt he was my friend. I was thinking about the toad and the motor car. Something we would read as a child. Thanks for sharing. Best to you in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
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Hi bro, Old contest long gone but so glad you came along I made "All Time Best" so these extra reviews will move that up some more before I go, pretty soon. Lord Bless.
Comment from Ulla
Hahahaha, Geoff, I liked this little gem of a poem. It is a fun read with great imagery and then It rhymes as well. It's a darn shame that you're leaving. Can't you be persuaded to stay on under the name you have now? All best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
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Hahahaha, Geoff, I liked this little gem of a poem. It is a fun read with great imagery and then It rhymes as well. It's a darn shame that you're leaving. Can't you be persuaded to stay on under the name you have now? All best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 30-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
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Ulla, appreciate the lovely review and so glad it made All Time best at last. There is a way for me to stay, think about it. But I don't expect you to make it possible ok. You are the only one, or pretty well, anyway that is so keen for me to stay. My "swansong": poem I will put up nearer my departure will again reinforce a lot of the reasons I am going off the pay side.
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Okay, Geoff, I'll wait for you 'swansong'.:)))
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL! What a fun offering... I'm sure it would make a great note to post on the pantry to help with the dieting efforts... :) :) Thanx for sharing that giggle and smile! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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LOL! What a fun offering... I'm sure it would make a great note to post on the pantry to help with the dieting efforts... :) :) Thanx for sharing that giggle and smile! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 28-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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Hi there thanks for coming by. This is an ancient poem. I don't know what happened to that novel you were writing. Getting very close to pulling the paying account plug here. I think I am connected through FREE account Pinny2 for after Mid November.
Comment from Sylvia Page
I know where Ryde is, I visit friends close by when in Sydney. Loved your Ode For A Toad. How could he have fasted at night and still have his clothes become too tight? Just kidding
Best regards,
Sylvia
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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I know where Ryde is, I visit friends close by when in Sydney. Loved your Ode For A Toad. How could he have fasted at night and still have his clothes become too tight? Just kidding
Best regards,
Sylvia
Comment Written 28-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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Thanks Sylvia. Glad you know Ryde. We happily have lived out West now for more than 30 years. Ancient poem appreciate your lovely review. Can't remember if we are connected through the FREE account Pinny 2 I leave sankey and Tootsie55 Mid November. Keep in touch.
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I don't think we are. My FaceBook is https://www.facebook.com/olivia.werapermall https://earthlyspice.wordpress.com/2019/09/19/cinnamon/
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Comment from Sally Law
This is a fine Limerick, dear Geoff. It has a nice beat and a funny story within. Sending you and Louise my best today as always with kindest regards,
Sally xoxo
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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This is a fine Limerick, dear Geoff. It has a nice beat and a funny story within. Sending you and Louise my best today as always with kindest regards,
Sally xoxo
Comment Written 27-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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Thanks, Sally contest has long gone on this one.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your ultra-concise poem is well-written and clever, conveying a message about how those pounds can pile up over the years. The line about fasting at night is especially funny, since sleeping people don't eat anyway!
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Your ultra-concise poem is well-written and clever, conveying a message about how those pounds can pile up over the years. The line about fasting at night is especially funny, since sleeping people don't eat anyway!
Comment Written 27-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Well done new friend. Can't remember if we have met before. Will fan you from my FREE account (Pinny2) as I leave the paying (sankey) site Mid November. Nice to meet another new friend and thanks for the great review on a very old poem. Contest long gone.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Sankey
Your ode for the contest is excellent. I have no more to say, other the best to you in the contest.
Gert
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Hello Sankey
Your ode for the contest is excellent. I have no more to say, other the best to you in the contest.
Gert
Comment Written 27-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Hi Gert, contest long over. This is an oldie that some said they missed on the first round. Thanks for coming by.Using up Funny money before I go off sankey in Mid November. I think we are in touch through FREE account Pinny2. Can't remember if we are in touch by e-mail will let you all know where i am posting after I get it sorted. Can't review or post on Pinny2 but can notify you of errors or what I thinkm of your stuff. The Greenback exchange rate is JUST ONE of the reasons I am quitting paying in here.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is really cute. I want to thank you for re-posting it. I missed it the first time around and it's definitely my loss. I enjoyed reading it this time. The flow is really fun.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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This is really cute. I want to thank you for re-posting it. I missed it the first time around and it's definitely my loss. I enjoyed reading it this time. The flow is really fun.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this. Seems good I re-posted. Using up funny money before I go. Very old post.Thanks for the review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Limerick about the way you are build seems that you may be a little over weight. No one thought it might be the clothes that shrinked in the wash.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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A very well-written Limerick about the way you are build seems that you may be a little over weight. No one thought it might be the clothes that shrinked in the wash.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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hehe sis so funny. Thanks for coming by. Will watch you from FREE account Pinny2 after Mid November.
Comment from Ricky1024
"The Ode for a Toad is an Odd Contest Entry"
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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Good luck with this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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"The Ode for a Toad is an Odd Contest Entry"
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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Good luck with this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 27-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Glad you liked it old mate. God Bless.
