Comment from DanielEkine

Excellent

First and foremost I love the artwork and it is something different from the usual art works people would use for such writing.
my best part.
""A real "Super-Creepo" a man with a non-conscious
appeal!
He dreams and schemes in black and white
it seems!" "

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013

Thanks!
This was a great write.
Part two and the conclusion
is waiting.
Richard.

Comment from Darkhorse555

Excellent

ha ha continues tomorrow nice one Richard well I better not go into my story to much I enjoyed reading your piece I wonder what part two is about leave me guessing beautiful piece keep it up

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013

Here is the conclusion!
It was a pisser and you
will love it!!!
Richard.
A horror story.
The Bus Rider. by Ricky1024
Artwork by Phyllis Stewart at FanArtReview.com
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By Dr. Richard Edward Smrkovsky
Slam-Poet of Laureate.

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{part #2-Conclusion.}
Richard arrives in Houston, Texas to meet and
Greet an old, friend named Rick Wallace.
Rick lived in Sewell , New Jersey will Rich
during the 60's and early 70's."
...
"Ring, Ring!
Hello is this Ricky?
Yes the man replies.
Rick this is Richard!
How the hell are You?
How the hell did you find me?
Phone book and internet of course you old,
decrepit Horse!
Ha, ha, Rich!
What do I deem as your answering machine is
always on high!!!
...
"Well, I just thought that I would love to see
some of Texas!
My family in Shulunberg, Texas {they own the
largest butchery in Texas.}
I'm going to hit them up for a fine, beef, meal
and then, you and I can explore our options."
...
"Groovy! Like an old, time, movie DUDE!
So they met and drink a few brews, reminisced
and slept comfortably that night in Ricky's
house in Houston. ...
"The next morning as Rich awoke, he slipped
on the floor...
To his surprise, the floor was covered in blood!
Ricky's blood!
Damn, I had better call 9-11, He thought as he
checked for breathing."

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"Ricky Wallace was massacred, similar to the
others.
That damn fiend from Jersey must have ventured
here but how in the Hell did he...
The Houston Police arrived in style, all 15
vehicles from ambulances to news reporters.
The scene was restrained and only forensics
and detectives were allowed inside.
Ricky was massacred in our sleep sir!
He was an old, childhood friend from Jersey.
Sir did you here or see anything?
No!
"Well then you may leave but give your address.
Thank you sir."
...
"Richard traveled by Greyhound and arrived in
Shulunberg at 9;30 PM.
He found his cousin Edwards house and knocked
in the door.
Hello, I'm Richard fron Jersey, Ed's Son.
Vulcav the 17th is you dad, right?
Yes, Richy!
How nice to finally meet and greet you!
We never have ventured back East, you know.
"Yes uncle Ed, I have not ever West either!

...
"So they feasted on roast beef, Pork, chicken,
steak, and finally, a huge ham!
They washed it down with White Wine from California
and dessert was a trick!"
...
Richard, you must spend the night and recite your
past life!
Yes, uncle Ed, I will.
Some Rich stayed three days and met all the emoploy-
ees at the plant and had a wonderful time!
They talked on every subject from war to religion,
peace to there past life in Czechoslovakia.
...
"After the three days, Richard departed back to Jersey.
The following day the Schulunberg Times mentioned one
the front page of three murders in the town.
Richard read that in the paper on the bus back and said...
...
"What a shame! Three more murders!
They say they owned a butchery in town.
Well, you should never kill an animal!
Right Parkway my loving black cat!!!
The End.


Author Notes
This piece was started July 19th, 2013 and
finished today, July 20th, 2013. Written in
the "Ocean County Library" in Manahawkin, NJ.
Started on a Dial-A-Ride bus at 11:55AM. and
finished at 12:25PM. Eastern Standard Time.
Special thanks goes out to FanStory and Tom,
FanArt Review, and the Artist earlier mentioned
in part #1.
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reply by Darkhorse555 on 20-Jul-2013

now I enjoyed reading that oh more dark tales I know you get scared I will try to write a sweet one with a twist ha ha talk to you later friend as the say in the soviet mus go talk to you soon keep up the writting

reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013

Thanks Darkhorse and Write scary as me!!!