Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Bubble Gum"Small and Specialty Poems
17 total reviews
Comment from MzNiki
Not often do I hand out 6 stars. I must say this piece was presented excellently, the image set up the reader immediately ( a lot of fun too), It was beautifully designed ~ almost perfect! Thank you for this contribution.........keep up the groovy work (-_-)!
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2013
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Not often do I hand out 6 stars. I must say this piece was presented excellently, the image set up the reader immediately ( a lot of fun too), It was beautifully designed ~ almost perfect! Thank you for this contribution.........keep up the groovy work (-_-)!
Comment Written 02-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2013
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Wow! Thank you so much MzNiki. You make me happy as I just woke up and read your review. I appreciate the accolades on this simple little piece that was fun to write.
Comment from barkingdog
Wonderful, entertaining nonet, Treischel.
'Might be trouble.' (I laughed right here) You had me so hooked into blowing the huge, ginormous bubble, then this...'Might be trouble.'
Great alliteration with 'too big this bubble' and onomatopoeia with, 'Puff, puff, POP!'
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2013
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Wonderful, entertaining nonet, Treischel.
'Might be trouble.' (I laughed right here) You had me so hooked into blowing the huge, ginormous bubble, then this...'Might be trouble.'
Great alliteration with 'too big this bubble' and onomatopoeia with, 'Puff, puff, POP!'
Comment Written 02-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2013
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Thank you barkingdog. Glad to make you smile. It was a fun write.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
A lovely funny nonet.
It's so true I can just see the whole process happening on any street anywhereand anytime.
Nicely presented and a super perfect picture choice,
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2013
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A lovely funny nonet.
It's so true I can just see the whole process happening on any street anywhereand anytime.
Nicely presented and a super perfect picture choice,
Comment Written 02-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2013
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Thank you seken58.
Comment from rhonny
This is short and sweet and very funny. It's a scenario I think many or most of us have played out at some time in our childhood. Great pic tool
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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This is short and sweet and very funny. It's a scenario I think many or most of us have played out at some time in our childhood. Great pic tool
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Thanks rhonny. I think that's true.
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:O)
Comment from Glasstruth
LOL. You've mastered the nonet with wonderful humor, and on top of that it rhymes with such ease. Good luck with the contest. Three thumbs up! Les
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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LOL. You've mastered the nonet with wonderful humor, and on top of that it rhymes with such ease. Good luck with the contest. Three thumbs up! Les
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Thanks Les, for the review and wishes.
Comment from sujo1964
Oh, Oh! Might be trouble!
Too big this bubble! I love this!! This is my first experience reading a Nonet, and what a fun experience you've made it for me.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Oh, Oh! Might be trouble!
Too big this bubble! I love this!! This is my first experience reading a Nonet, and what a fun experience you've made it for me.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Thank you sujo.
Comment from Selina Stambi
How on earth did you do that ... build the momentum like that?
You brought the reader to a frenzied climax of POP!
What a fun poem - took me right back to my childhood. :)
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2013
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How on earth did you do that ... build the momentum like that?
You brought the reader to a frenzied climax of POP!
What a fun poem - took me right back to my childhood. :)
Comment Written 15-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2013
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Thank you Sonali. It was a fun little write.
Comment from robina1978
Excellent picture to complement this poem. A very original subject about bubble gum. Might maybe make you a strong contender. I hope so. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013
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Excellent picture to complement this poem. A very original subject about bubble gum. Might maybe make you a strong contender. I hope so. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013
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Thanks Ine. For the review and well wishes.
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very welcome, Ine
Comment from NicciFaye
Nice......fun......and.....i can say.....ive done this.. The picture is perfect and a fun and beautiful flowing.....popping nonet!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013
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Nice......fun......and.....i can say.....ive done this.. The picture is perfect and a fun and beautiful flowing.....popping nonet!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013
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Thank you Nicci.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hah! Been there, done that. Of course, I still enjoy blowing an occasional bubble-gum orb or two, even today. But now, since I am sans hair, it's not as big a problem when it explodes all over my head, hee-hee...
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013
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Hah! Been there, done that. Of course, I still enjoy blowing an occasional bubble-gum orb or two, even today. But now, since I am sans hair, it's not as big a problem when it explodes all over my head, hee-hee...
Comment Written 14-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013
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Thanks Dean, yes, hair can be a problem when full of gum.
