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Small and Specialty Poems

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Comment from Selina Stambi
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You have created a breathtaking cameo here, Tom, a la adewpearl!

I could just see the li'l fella and gramps peering down at the bug.

I think this pretty little piece is fabulous and worthy of a woman's pen (this is a compliment!) :)

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 15-Jul-2013
    Thank you. Sonali.I'll take the compliment.
Comment from robina1978
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A nice sharp photo, I don't see the grass hopper though. And the modification worked no problem. How a flower and a little creature can be so inspiring is truly amazing.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 13-Jul-2013
    Thank you Ine.
reply by robina1978 on 13-Jul-2013
    welcome to both of them, Ine
Comment from NicciFaye
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Truly beautiful Treischel....I really love the hoppity cruisin....I thought that was creative...well done and lovely picture and complimented poem...enjoyed it.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 13-Jul-2013
    Thank you Nicci, I'm glad you liked that one. I'm smiling!
Comment from sunnilicious
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Nice poem. Good form. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Clear visual imagery created. Great author notes. Excellent work. Have a great weekend :)

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
    Thank you so much Sunnilicious. Have a good one too.
Comment from CornishChick
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This is so sweet. It brought a smile to my face, especially the last sentence. I'm glad you write out what poetry forms you use because you know I'm the one that doesn't "get" poetry and I sense you're trying to lure me in! :-)

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
    Thank you Arlene. Set into my web little fly.
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
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My we are into flowers and bugs today I see. I like it rather refreshing after reading about death rape and pillage for the last hr lol
TK

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
    Thank you. Glad to pull you away from all of that.
Comment from Capricorn30
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A well-penned poem to complement a beautiful photograph;
A fine tale of adventure as both golden flora and busy insects interact with human curiosity.
I agree Tom, it is so darned fascinating viewing nature's wonderful creations!

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
    Thank you Margaret my 8 year old grandson is loving it too, that really excites me..
Comment from Preston McWhorter
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Hi, Treischel,
This an excellent rispetto poem. The flow and rhyme are good. A consistent rhyme scheme is followed. It has good images and paints a pleasing scene. I enjoyed this one.
Preston

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
    Thank you Preston..