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Comment from ravenblack
Always wanted a convertible. For that matter, a motorcycle too. Like the freedom expressed in " down the road to nowhere/ that I don't want to be". In other words, no definate destination and not anywhere you would not want to go - pure freedom. A double negative becomes a positive.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
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Always wanted a convertible. For that matter, a motorcycle too. Like the freedom expressed in " down the road to nowhere/ that I don't want to be". In other words, no definate destination and not anywhere you would not want to go - pure freedom. A double negative becomes a positive.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
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That's the drift off it. Thanks Ravenblack.
Comment from Selina Stambi
Ha! you've expressed perfectly how I feel when the winter's done and I can't wait to start digging in the garden.
Love: Rambling with the roof off and Down the road to nowhere
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
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Ha! you've expressed perfectly how I feel when the winter's done and I can't wait to start digging in the garden.
Love: Rambling with the roof off and Down the road to nowhere
Comment Written 12-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
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Thank you Sonali, it's great to get out to enjoy the sun and the wind.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Treischel,
This is an excellent poem. Never owned a rag top but if this is how you feel will have to get one. Only worry about cold drizzle from a leak dripping down my neck.
Preston
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2013
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Hi, Treischel,
This is an excellent poem. Never owned a rag top but if this is how you feel will have to get one. Only worry about cold drizzle from a leak dripping down my neck.
Preston
Comment Written 11-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2013
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Thanks Preston.
Convertible Rule 1: Not good to need to run wipers when top down.
Convertible Rule 2: Once you own one, you'll never go back.
Convertible Rule 3: at 50 degrees or lower, windows up, heater on.
Comment from sunnilicious
The interior of your car is in excellent condition. You must not drive it around much. Well, good poem. Creative with vivid imagery. Great!
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013
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The interior of your car is in excellent condition. You must not drive it around much. Well, good poem. Creative with vivid imagery. Great!
Comment Written 10-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013
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Thank you sunnilicious. Only about 12,000 miles a year.
Comment from Capricorn30
Nothing symbolizes summer more than an open-topped vehicle as well-expressed in a writing of freedom, as all roads lead to great adventures.
A well-penned, seasonal expression.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013
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Nothing symbolizes summer more than an open-topped vehicle as well-expressed in a writing of freedom, as all roads lead to great adventures.
A well-penned, seasonal expression.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013
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Thank you, Caoricorn/ Margeret. I love that little car.
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Yes! I get that impression!
Comment from 4tun81
You and the Pontiac G6. They don't make 'em like that any more! I am pleased that you can finally enjoy top down motoring. Nice quatrain too!
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013
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You and the Pontiac G6. They don't make 'em like that any more! I am pleased that you can finally enjoy top down motoring. Nice quatrain too!
Comment Written 10-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013
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Thank you 4tun81.
Comment from donette1914
wow! how refreshing to drive with the top down, feeling the wind on a warm summer day, love the photo! a well penned job it was a pleasure
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013
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wow! how refreshing to drive with the top down, feeling the wind on a warm summer day, love the photo! a well penned job it was a pleasure
Comment Written 10-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much donette.
