Love
Without love where would we be?16 total reviews
Comment from kiwijenny
I don't understand what the ABC poetry contest requires..........
I see LMNOL........................?
But I love this poem ...........
I love the picture..........
God bless
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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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I don't understand what the ABC poetry contest requires..........
I see LMNOL........................?
But I love this poem ...........
I love the picture..........
God bless
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Comment Written 08-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Hello Jenny, the contest requires one stanza with the last line starting with a different letter; not following a sequence like ABCDE-G instead of ABCDEF. Hope this clears it up - read the contest rules. Thank you for reading my friend. Bless you, Kay.
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Thanks for clearing that up
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
A clever ABC poem with an endearing picture to complement it.
Love makes the world go around and each day brighter so if even one person reads your poem and heeds it's message who knows... It may be the start of something wonderful
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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A clever ABC poem with an endearing picture to complement it.
Love makes the world go around and each day brighter so if even one person reads your poem and heeds it's message who knows... It may be the start of something wonderful
Comment Written 08-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Thank you seken58; if one reads then the love is passed on. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from adewpearl
What a great photo :-)
Your poem is in excellent ABC Poem format
I particularly like the visual and the mood created by nestling in arms of joy
I also like the consonance of L sounds throughout and the overall exuberant tone :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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What a great photo :-)
Your poem is in excellent ABC Poem format
I particularly like the visual and the mood created by nestling in arms of joy
I also like the consonance of L sounds throughout and the overall exuberant tone :-) Brooke
Comment Written 08-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Hello Brooke, Thank you darling girl - I was thinking of the love that Sawyer brings to us all when we read your poems. Bless you, Kay.
Comment from lorijean
A great little verse, where would we be without love, whether it comes from a another person or an animal, a pleasure to read.....
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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A great little verse, where would we be without love, whether it comes from a another person or an animal, a pleasure to read.....
Comment Written 08-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Hello Lorijean, Thanks so much for reading, glad you enjoyed. Love makes the world go round. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from jmdg1954
Great photo Kay. I can see the joy and twinkle in the eyes of the children here. Love does move everyone, when its felt on your heart the bond is as strong as anything.
Nicely crafted... John
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Great photo Kay. I can see the joy and twinkle in the eyes of the children here. Love does move everyone, when its felt on your heart the bond is as strong as anything.
Nicely crafted... John
Comment Written 08-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Hello John, Thank you for reading - love makes the world go round and we need lots of love in the times we live in. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from Darkhorse555
from the beautiful picture in warmly dressed attire smiling through in enjoyment as their eyes twinkle opening up saying lovely piece
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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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from the beautiful picture in warmly dressed attire smiling through in enjoyment as their eyes twinkle opening up saying lovely piece
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Comment Written 08-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much for reading, I appreciate your thoughts. Cheers, Kay.
