Love
Without love where would we be?16 total reviews
Comment from olivia22
It true love moves everyone and everyone want to be loved. where love is there is always smiles. i which this poem was longer. Love always open heart because that where it reside. thanks for this wonderful work.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2013
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It true love moves everyone and everyone want to be loved. where love is there is always smiles. i which this poem was longer. Love always open heart because that where it reside. thanks for this wonderful work.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2013
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Hello Olivia, Thanks for reading - why 4 stars? Something needs fixing? Because 4 stars says it needs work. Thanks, Kay.
Comment from Eleanor Buron
Each line stands alone; they all relate well to the topic of love. I especially like the "Nestling in arms of joy" - Much comfort in the word 'nestling' - ;)
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2013
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Each line stands alone; they all relate well to the topic of love. I especially like the "Nestling in arms of joy" - Much comfort in the word 'nestling' - ;)
Comment Written 27-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2013
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Thank you dear friend, glad you were nestled in the arms of joy; love reminds me of baby birds nestling with their Mother. Love, Kay.
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I love words - and nestling is one of my favorite. Sorry I take long absences from the site. Working full-time has its downfall.
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Thank you for dropping in; busy life you have. Have you seen my latest called The Silver Cord? :-) Love, K.
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Aussie! Hi! No I haven't been on for two months but intend to take a look at your works. Miss this connection but right now time is not available for many extra-curricular activities. Hence, the poetry suffers. I'm still a poet, none-the-less and have been doing a lot of revising or re-visioning - what ever you want to call it. ;)
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Once a poet - always a poet. Love, Kay. See yah round like a rissole!
Comment from Alan K Pease
The children's eyes and embrace tells your story in prose so very well. The fact they are aboriginal emphasizes the universality of these feelings. Well done Aussie!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
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The children's eyes and embrace tells your story in prose so very well. The fact they are aboriginal emphasizes the universality of these feelings. Well done Aussie!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
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Hello Alan, Thanks so much for reading, glad you enjoyed the poem and yes, the smile on their faces tells it all. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Your choice of letters and the use of them are wonderful, Kay. They not only follow the rules of the contest they make perfect sense, they put a smile my face. Good luck in the contest! :) xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013
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Your choice of letters and the use of them are wonderful, Kay. They not only follow the rules of the contest they make perfect sense, they put a smile my face. Good luck in the contest! :) xsx Sandra
Comment Written 10-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013
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Thank you Sandra; glad you liked the poem. Hope all is well. Love, Kay.
Comment from Taffspride
Love, oh yes my friend it can be seen in the eyes of a child. Or in the soulful eyes of a faithful dog. You are right, who cannot help be moved by it? Love conquers all.
Thanks for sharing your beautiful words Kay.
Iechyd da
Ann
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Love, oh yes my friend it can be seen in the eyes of a child. Or in the soulful eyes of a faithful dog. You are right, who cannot help be moved by it? Love conquers all.
Thanks for sharing your beautiful words Kay.
Iechyd da
Ann
Comment Written 09-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Hello Annie, Thanks for reading and let's all share some love today. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi K,
You have penned a fabulous ABC poem for the contest. The picture you chose serves to highlight your excellent word choices. You are so right love moves everyone. Well done and good luck in the contest....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Hi K,
You have penned a fabulous ABC poem for the contest. The picture you chose serves to highlight your excellent word choices. You are so right love moves everyone. Well done and good luck in the contest....blessings, chey
Comment Written 09-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Hello Happy Gardener, Thanks for reading and your great review! Sending some love your way. Blessings, K.
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welcome!
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
This is precious, and the picture is so adorable, their smiles say it all. The greatest gift from God is the gift of love. Excellent my friend. God loves you and I do too.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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This is precious, and the picture is so adorable, their smiles say it all. The greatest gift from God is the gift of love. Excellent my friend. God loves you and I do too.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Thank you Evelyn; the greatest gift is love and God is love. Bless you, Kay.
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Aussie ...
In your five-line presentation for this ABC Poetry Contest, you have presented us with a fine variety of
thoughts relative to the word 'Love' and its effect on our lives.
As this is a Contest entry, I wish you well. Thank you for sharing these thoughts with us.
Love from .... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Hullo Aussie ...
In your five-line presentation for this ABC Poetry Contest, you have presented us with a fine variety of
thoughts relative to the word 'Love' and its effect on our lives.
As this is a Contest entry, I wish you well. Thank you for sharing these thoughts with us.
Love from .... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Hello Nanette Mary, Thanks so much for reading; God is love. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from zeldasmith
LOVE is all you need. What the world needs now is LOVE sweet LOVE...that's how the song goes anyway. And you said it in a few words. This too could be put in a book for young people. Good writ.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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LOVE is all you need. What the world needs now is LOVE sweet LOVE...that's how the song goes anyway. And you said it in a few words. This too could be put in a book for young people. Good writ.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Hello Zelda, Thanks for reading; God is love. Bless you, Kay.
Comment from Jean Lutz
Such a beautiful poem with so much meaning. I just referred another FanStorian to your writing after reading a poem he or she wrote about Aboriginal children. Best to you with the entry.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Such a beautiful poem with so much meaning. I just referred another FanStorian to your writing after reading a poem he or she wrote about Aboriginal children. Best to you with the entry.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Hello Jean, Thanks so much for reading and referring; God is love. Bless you, Kay.
