Bromance?
A poem of two childhood friends in search of unwavering love16 total reviews
Comment from jusylee72
Darling picture and I truly hope they are friends for ever and ever. I love that they are outside playing. I like these short poems but I have a hard time critiquing them. I just know I like this one. Thank you.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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Darling picture and I truly hope they are friends for ever and ever. I love that they are outside playing. I like these short poems but I have a hard time critiquing them. I just know I like this one. Thank you.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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Wow!
Thank you so much for your support & appreciation...It's greatly appreciated, too!
Comment from pmait
I like it. I find it fascinating when couples tell how they met. Sometimes the attraction is immediate, and other times they have no clue that this is the one. In my case I saw her long before she noticed me. In some cases it begins very early with just playing together. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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I like it. I find it fascinating when couples tell how they met. Sometimes the attraction is immediate, and other times they have no clue that this is the one. In my case I saw her long before she noticed me. In some cases it begins very early with just playing together. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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LoL!
Thanks my friend for that concise review & generous rating!! It's greatly appreciated...
Comment from Sonjalee
Excellent job of writing a 5-7-5 poem. I like the message. It is lovely and warns the person to whom it is written.
Today is the start, be careful with your heart. Good advice for all of us young and old.
Great job
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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Excellent job of writing a 5-7-5 poem. I like the message. It is lovely and warns the person to whom it is written.
Today is the start, be careful with your heart. Good advice for all of us young and old.
Great job
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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Thanks Sonjalee!
Comment from Mark Alan Trimeloni
Today is the start
Just be careful with your heart
And we'll never fart?
That is too funny. Thank you for making me laugh.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2013
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Today is the start
Just be careful with your heart
And we'll never fart?
That is too funny. Thank you for making me laugh.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2013
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Thank you Mark for laughing your heart out!
Thank you too for choosing my photo for the 5 installments of Tommy's pubescent awakening...
You can visit my page for more!
Have a blessed and cheerful Sunday
Comment from EMB
Haha! When I first read this, I read it too fast, thinking that the final word was "part." Then I took a double take and started laughing. That was great. :)
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2013
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Haha! When I first read this, I read it too fast, thinking that the final word was "part." Then I took a double take and started laughing. That was great. :)
Comment Written 02-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2013
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Thanks Ed for laughing with a high rating!
Comment from Righteous Riter
The syllable count is spot on which qualifies this piece for a 5-7-5. The photo compliments the piece well as the writer delivers a message that makes the reader laugh. Fart is good for humor. Keep it.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2013
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The syllable count is spot on which qualifies this piece for a 5-7-5. The photo compliments the piece well as the writer delivers a message that makes the reader laugh. Fart is good for humor. Keep it.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2013
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Thanks so much Righteous Riter for the suggestion. I'm just a newbie but I'm active here at FanartReview...thanks for the high rating!
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
I suppose any word is allowed within reason - a 5/7/5 poem with correct syllable count. Nice picture to accompany your poem. Good luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2013
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I suppose any word is allowed within reason - a 5/7/5 poem with correct syllable count. Nice picture to accompany your poem. Good luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2013
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Thanks Dorothy for the encouraging review and inspiring rating!
Comment from amanda98653
haha. A very humorous "love" poem. Childhood of innocence:)
"Just be careful with your heart "
A great advice you have there.
God bless
-AJ
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2013
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haha. A very humorous "love" poem. Childhood of innocence:)
"Just be careful with your heart "
A great advice you have there.
God bless
-AJ
Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2013
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Thanks Amanda for appreciating with a high rating!'
Comment from Martin Chan
This is a 5-7-5 poetry contest entry poem "Bromance " written as a humor poem. the poem is about two childhood friends and it is composed with nice chosen words to enhance the humor factor. A very nice imagination.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2013
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This is a 5-7-5 poetry contest entry poem "Bromance " written as a humor poem. the poem is about two childhood friends and it is composed with nice chosen words to enhance the humor factor. A very nice imagination.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much Martin for the appreciative review and excellent rating!
Comment from ravenblack
Sorry,
Just Don't get
What you mean
By the last line
What's a fart
Got to do
With love
Of any sort
And why a question mark?
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2013
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Sorry,
Just Don't get
What you mean
By the last line
What's a fart
Got to do
With love
Of any sort
And why a question mark?
Comment Written 31-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2013
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Okay thanks for the honest review and the rating!
