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Comment from Selina Stambi
A succinct poem, brief lines and still ...
you re-created that colourful night of fiery revelry.
Gifted with words, you are, sir! :)
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2013
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A succinct poem, brief lines and still ...
you re-created that colourful night of fiery revelry.
Gifted with words, you are, sir! :)
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2013
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Thank you Sonali. I'm smiling at your response.
Comment from L. Sherman
Speaking of Holiday Rockets, I hope you had a happy and safe 4th! For as simple and sparse as this style is, the carefully chosen words are full of impact and creates a vivid scene.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2013
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Speaking of Holiday Rockets, I hope you had a happy and safe 4th! For as simple and sparse as this style is, the carefully chosen words are full of impact and creates a vivid scene.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2013
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Thank you very much Lisa. Yes I did.
Comment from mrsmajor
A thoughtful poem, in celebration of the fourth of July celebration,the picture made for a perfect package.
Thanks for sharing,
Hugs,
Victoria
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2013
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A thoughtful poem, in celebration of the fourth of July celebration,the picture made for a perfect package.
Thanks for sharing,
Hugs,
Victoria
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2013
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Thank you Victoria. Have a wonderful day.
Smiles!
Comment from Gungalo
Holiday
Shooting rockets
Flags unfurled
Bright blast away
Nighttime revel
Ignites dark world
Night patriotic display
A really good Whitney Tom and a nice picture too. You are quite talented with that camera.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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Holiday
Shooting rockets
Flags unfurled
Bright blast away
Nighttime revel
Ignites dark world
Night patriotic display
A really good Whitney Tom and a nice picture too. You are quite talented with that camera.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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Thanks Gungalo. That shot wasn't easy, glad you appreciate it.
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Oh yeah, I know the difficulties. LOL
Comment from Capricorn30
Celebrations of a wonderful, national holiday expressed utilizing great visual images, my favourite: "Bright blast away".
Darkness certainly highlighted with outstanding fireworks!
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Celebrations of a wonderful, national holiday expressed utilizing great visual images, my favourite: "Bright blast away".
Darkness certainly highlighted with outstanding fireworks!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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Thank you Capricorn. That was a tough shot to get.
Comment from sunnilicious
Well, it sure is a long weekend for you. Good photograph. Kids use to love rockets, cherry bombs and sparklers when I was young. I was scared of the stuff. Great poem. Good form. Excellent.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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Well, it sure is a long weekend for you. Good photograph. Kids use to love rockets, cherry bombs and sparklers when I was young. I was scared of the stuff. Great poem. Good form. Excellent.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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Thank you sunnilicious. Kids sure do, even today.
Comment from NicciFaye
Well written Treischel....I enjoyed the creation of this poem the lesson on a Whitney poem....a excellent 4th of July....patriotic addition to your series of poems over the last couple of days.
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Well written Treischel....I enjoyed the creation of this poem the lesson on a Whitney poem....a excellent 4th of July....patriotic addition to your series of poems over the last couple of days.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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Thank you Nicci. Glad you enjoyed my holiday series.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Treischel.
"Holiday Rockets" is excellent "light" poetry with enjoyable rhythm and rhyme. The illustration is pretty and colorful.
Preston
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Hi, Treischel.
"Holiday Rockets" is excellent "light" poetry with enjoyable rhythm and rhyme. The illustration is pretty and colorful.
Preston
Comment Written 06-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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Thank you Preston..
Comment from emjaihammond
I enjoyed this poem. A perfect fit for the fourth of July. I do like the ideas expressed in your work. Especially the With bright display
Nighttime revel
Ignites dark world
Bright patriotic display
A wonderful creation with good timing.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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I enjoyed this poem. A perfect fit for the fourth of July. I do like the ideas expressed in your work. Especially the With bright display
Nighttime revel
Ignites dark world
Bright patriotic display
A wonderful creation with good timing.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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Thank you very much emjaihammond.
