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I am still so amazed at how you can share your pain with us..and so darn honored to be allowed to..GO get that bike, enjoy your life, and thank the creator everyday! Wake up calls and second chances are amazing things my friend! Donkeyoatey

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2013


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    Background
    Chapter #13.

    By Dr. Richard Edward Smrkovsky

    <><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>
    **********************************

    "Do die and pass...
    Do experience life ever last...
    Do visualize a complete complement.
    Do be gathered by chance and except
    a second and more blessing chance...
    ...
    "As God breathes new life back,
    take another crack!
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    Your pulse is full, beating, and greeting!
    Experiences excreting!
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What an adventure the writer went through. But I did like the last lines and attitude.

Well, to make a long story come to a conclusion, no
monitors, eating and drinking sleeping alert....
I will have a beer, celebrate this July ah, and get
me another BIKE!!!!

Great ending.

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    Background
    Chapter #13.

    By Dr. Richard Edward Smrkovsky

    <><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>
    **********************************

    "Do die and pass...
    Do experience life ever last...
    Do visualize a complete complement.
    Do be gathered by chance and except
    a second and more blessing chance...
    ...
    "As God breathes new life back,
    take another crack!
    Your heart will again beat !
    Your brain damages will mend!
    Bleeding finally stops!!!
    25,35,45,60!
    Your heart again reciprocates!"
    ...
    "You are strengthened!
    Your pulse is full, beating, and greeting!
    Experiences excreting!
    Mind emitting!
    Who are know the *VESSEL!
    a device powered by Jesus Christ!




    Author Notes
    *-VESSEL a representative of Christ.
    Written July 07th, 2013 at 9;55 PM. and finished
    10:04 PM. Eastern Standard Time.

    "Special thanks goes out to God, Pope Pious
    the 6th, my family who watch over me, Fan
    Story, Fan Art Review, and the artist[my friend} 'donkeyoatey!'

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Comment from donette1914
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this sounds so painful and i am so sorry about what had happened to you and i felt you did a good job and it was a pleasure to read your work

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2013


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