Little Poems
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Comment from adewpearl
lovely pairing of your beautiful photo and poem, which is in excellent 5/7/5 form
I like the repetition of wild and the alliteration in
wherever wind and nurtured by nature
you create a scene that is both easy and inviting to visualize :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2013
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lovely pairing of your beautiful photo and poem, which is in excellent 5/7/5 form
I like the repetition of wild and the alliteration in
wherever wind and nurtured by nature
you create a scene that is both easy and inviting to visualize :-) Brooke
Comment Written 29-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2013
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Thank you very much Brooke.
Comment from GregoryCody
Haikus are typically or always about nature. May I ask why you didn't title it one? Well no matter, this is lovely. I like how you break it up with a comma in the first line, ellipses yes? The piece paints a great image. Love the notes too, an interesting flower. You love flowers and nature!
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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Haikus are typically or always about nature. May I ask why you didn't title it one? Well no matter, this is lovely. I like how you break it up with a comma in the first line, ellipses yes? The piece paints a great image. Love the notes too, an interesting flower. You love flowers and nature!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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Thank you Gregory. Yes, I am very in to nature.
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Do you make it up to Canada a lot? My father in law is Canadian. Beautiful place.
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I've traveled all over Canada when I worked. I spend a year traveling to all the Provinces up there looking for businesses that could be our suppliers on a Contract we had that required Canadian Content. Since I've retired I haven't gotten up there.
Comment from 9999pool
The wild flowers of nature and wherever their seeds fall, nature will nurture them. Good alliteration. The wild flowers will continue to propagate and telling us to give them a chance to survive and not be destroyed by our greed. They will remind us not to forget who we are - as wild and carefree as them.
Great write and well expressed.
Cheerio, Ritchie.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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The wild flowers of nature and wherever their seeds fall, nature will nurture them. Good alliteration. The wild flowers will continue to propagate and telling us to give them a chance to survive and not be destroyed by our greed. They will remind us not to forget who we are - as wild and carefree as them.
Great write and well expressed.
Cheerio, Ritchie.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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Thank you Ritchie. Yes, wild and free.
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Welcome, Tom. Cheerio, Ritchie.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
the saying goes, 'A weed is only a weed, when it grows in the wrong place.' And I suppose it is true. But I do think nature has given the world such beauty to look at, all around us, we will find these beautiful wild flowers, and they truly are a wonder of nature. Your photo is sheer art! xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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the saying goes, 'A weed is only a weed, when it grows in the wrong place.' And I suppose it is true. But I do think nature has given the world such beauty to look at, all around us, we will find these beautiful wild flowers, and they truly are a wonder of nature. Your photo is sheer art! xsx Sandra
Comment Written 29-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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Thank you so much Sandra. Yes, I totally agree. Good to hear from you. How is the move going? You must be busy. One of my brothers just visited Madrid. I'll have to get to Spain, England, Ireland, and Scotland some day.
Comment from country ranch writer
I used to go with my grandpa out in the swamp and get lady slippers and pussy willows(THEY HAVE A FANCY NAME). mother nature is beautiful sending out seeds of wild flowers all over the world
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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I used to go with my grandpa out in the swamp and get lady slippers and pussy willows(THEY HAVE A FANCY NAME). mother nature is beautiful sending out seeds of wild flowers all over the world
Comment Written 29-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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Thank you Country Ranch Writer. No gardener can match her.
Comment from rhonny
Very nice work, keeping to the requirements of 5-7-5 and painting a pretty picture, and reminding us that are free spirits so to speak. Nice pic. too.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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Very nice work, keeping to the requirements of 5-7-5 and painting a pretty picture, and reminding us that are free spirits so to speak. Nice pic. too.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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Thank you rhonny.
Comment from Selina Stambi
Another pretty, thoughtful little piece from you, oh, most prolific one!
I love walking endlessly and picking flowers and leaves, sometimes, to press and create into other things.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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Another pretty, thoughtful little piece from you, oh, most prolific one!
I love walking endlessly and picking flowers and leaves, sometimes, to press and create into other things.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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Thank you Sonali. That is a wonderful activity.
Comment from robina1978
Excellent photo to complement this little poem. Wild flowers can be the most beautiful in our surroundings like you tell us in your lovely 5-7-5 poem: nurtured by nature.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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Excellent photo to complement this little poem. Wild flowers can be the most beautiful in our surroundings like you tell us in your lovely 5-7-5 poem: nurtured by nature.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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Thank you Ine. Have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from Sararb
I love this 5-7-5 poem about wildflowers, seeds and nature. I love wild flowers. I had rather receive a bouquet of wildflowers that someone had picked for me, than any cold storage expensive flowers. I love this last verse. Wild flowers, wild seeds grow wherever the winds takes them. nurtured by nature. Lovely poem! Sara :)
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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I love this 5-7-5 poem about wildflowers, seeds and nature. I love wild flowers. I had rather receive a bouquet of wildflowers that someone had picked for me, than any cold storage expensive flowers. I love this last verse. Wild flowers, wild seeds grow wherever the winds takes them. nurtured by nature. Lovely poem! Sara :)
Comment Written 27-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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Thanks Sara. I'll be writing more wild flower poems, since I recently took a bunch of pictures.
Comment from sunnilicious
You can buy wild seeds on a mat. Lay on the lawn. Sprinkle with water as necessary and grow your own wildflower garden. I love the informercial. But majority of the time, growing wildflowers is just like your haiku poem. Excellent work.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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You can buy wild seeds on a mat. Lay on the lawn. Sprinkle with water as necessary and grow your own wildflower garden. I love the informercial. But majority of the time, growing wildflowers is just like your haiku poem. Excellent work.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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Thank you sunnilicious. You can do that and I've seen it done. When I lived in Colorado Springs on Cheyenne Mountain, we used to do that between the scrub oak in our yard. That works well.
