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Only For You

From the one who waits at home

36 total reviews 
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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This is sweet; I like it. The idea of a "true kiss" sounds interesting. Guess we all want someone who will write us letters. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2013


    Good morning Crystie,

    Thank you for your kind thoughts
    Everything this poet lived for is in the last lines of this tiny poem.

    As someone, much wiser than I, once shared with me, god must have needed him more than I did.
    He died less than a month after I wrote this poem in the spring of 2009.

    I wrote about him in a very happy poem called "rapscallions gifts".
    I offer it, not for potential reviews...rather for your enjoyment.
    It is a celebration poem.
    Not for a birthday or a holiday.. But for a childhood lost
    and found

    Peace, hugs and lots of smiles,
    Jill
    :-)
Comment from lorijean
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Such a lovely poem, I can relate to this very well, I did a lot of waiting for someone, a real pleasure to read, thank you for sharing...

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013

    Good morning lorijean,

    "such a lovely poem ..."
    Thank you for your kind thoughts
    Everything this poet lived for is in the last lines of this tiny poem.

    As someone, much wiser than I, once shared with me, god must have needed him more than I did.
    He died less than a month after I wrote this poem in the spring of 2009.

    I wrote about him in a very happy poem called "rapscallions gifts".
    I offer it, not for potential reviews...rather for your enjoyment.
    It is a celebration poem.
    Not for a birthday or a holiday.. But for a childhood lost
    and found

    Peace, hugs and lots of smiles,
    Jill
    :-)
Comment from donette1914
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simply lovely and heartfelt so many one go off to war for so many years and so many have lonely lives waiting for their return well done

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013

    Good morning donette,

    "simply lovely and heartfelt...."
    Thank you for your kind thoughts
    Everything this poet lived for is in the last lines of this tiny poem.

    As someone, much wiser than I, once shared with me, god must have needed him more than I did.
    He died less than a month after I wrote this poem in the spring of 2009.

    I wrote about him in a very happy poem called "rapscallions gifts".
    I offer it, not for potential reviews...rather for your enjoyment.
    It is a celebration poem.
    Not for a birthday or a holiday.. But for a childhood lost
    and found

    Peace, hugs and lots of smiles,
    Jill
    :-)
Comment from Zue65
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This author really deserved the recognition and for the poem to reach all time best status means the author was able to connect with the readers. Love has always been an effective subject that easily melts the hearts of the readers. and this poem did it. Kudos.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013

    Good morning nassus1957,

    "love has always been an effective subject...melts the hearts of the readers". Thank you for your kind thoughts
    Everything this poet lived for is in that one final sentence of this tiny poem.

    As someone, much wiser than I, once shared with me, god must have needed him more than I did.
    He died less than a month after I wrote this poem in the spring of 2009.

    I wrote about him in a very happy poem called "rapscallions gifts".
    I offer it, not for potential reviews...rather for your enjoyment.
    It is a celebration poem.
    Not for a birthday or a holiday but for a childhood lost
    and found

    Peace, hugs and lots of smiles,
    Jill
    :-)
reply by Zue65 on 24-Jun-2013
    God bless uptowngirlchef1961, sorry to hear that, death is definitely painful but yes, your wise friend is right, he must be fulfilling an important task in heaven. I will read the poem, my new friend and thanks for the gesture. God bless.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
    You are very kind to offer such warm and generous words

    You won't be disappointed in "rapscallions gifts" at least I hope that you will not be.

    Peace, hugs and lots of smiles,
    Jill
    :-)
reply by Zue65 on 24-Jun-2013
    I browse at your profile I can't find Rapscallions gifts, how do I find it, pardon my stupidity, I am an internet newbie.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
    Good morning nassus,

    To find my favorite poem "rapscallions gifts", just look on the second page of my portfolio. Enjoy!

    Thank you for writing back. I truly appreciate that you have been writing such terrific reviews. As I have said before, it will be a pleasure getting to know you through your poems.

    Have a great weekend!

    Peace, hugs and lots of smiles,
    Jill
    :-)
Comment from Black_Oxygen
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Well Done ~ Jill

This is beautiful Love Poetry. I like the way that the
words are arranged on the page. The attached illustration
is a nice accent that enhances the message.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013

    Good morning Ron,

    "beautiful love poetry". Thank you for your kind thoughts
    Everything this poet lived for is in that one final sentence of this tiny poem.

    As someone, much wiser than I, once shared with me, god must have needed him more than I did.
    He died less than a month after I wrote this poem in the spring of 2009.

    I wrote about him in a very happy poem called "rapscallions gifts".
    I offer it, not for potential reviews...rather for your enjoyment.
    It is a celebration poem.
    Not for a birthday or a holiday...rather for a childhood lost
    and found

    Peace, hugs and lots of smiles,
    Jill
    :-)
Comment from GregoryCody
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This is a great piece. Very endearing, especially after the notes! You have a solid flow and interesting and Great descriptions,

I
sip my coffee
from
your rooster mug
keep myself warm

Great piece! I bet it touched many people.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013

    Good morning Gregory,

    "great piece. Very endearing". Thank you for your kind thoughts
    Everything this poet lived for is in that one final sentence of this tiny poem.

    As someone, much wiser than I, once shared with me, god must have needed him more than I did.
    He died less than a month after I wrote this poem in the spring of 2009.

    I wrote about him in a very happy poem called "rapscallions gifts".
    I offer it, not for potential reviews...rather for your enjoyment.
    It is a celebration poem.
    Not for a birthday or a holiday but for a childhood lost
    and found

    Peace, hugs and lots of smiles,
    Jill
    :-)
Comment from muezza56
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i really enjoyed reading this really well written romantic poem, and well describes the emotions and love a soldiers partner must feel and hope that they return safely

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013

    Good morning Jerry,

    "a really well-written romantic poem". Thank you for your kind thoughts
    Everything this poet lived for is in that one final sentence of this tiny poem.

    As someone, much wiser than I, once shared with me, god must have needed him more than I did.
    He died less than a month after I wrote this poem in the spring of 2009.

    I wrote about him in a very happy poem called "rapscallions gifts".
    I offer it, not for potential reviews...rather for your enjoyment.
    It is a celebration poem.
    Not for a birthday or a holiday but for a childhood lost
    and found

    Peace, hugs and lots of smiles,
    Jill
    :-)
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Yes this is well written my friend and must be a comfort to those who need to read this well done my friend I enjoyed regards Jill

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013

    Good morning Jill,

    It was indeed a "comfort for those who need it". Thank you for your kind thoughts
    Everything this poet lived for is in that one final sentence of this tiny poem.

    As someone, much wiser than I, once shared with me, god must have needed him more than I did.
    He died less than a month after I wrote this poem in the spring of 2009.

    I wrote about him in a very happy poem called "rapscallions gifts".
    I offer it, not for potential reviews...rather for your enjoyment.
    It is a celebration poem.
    Not for a birthday or a holiday but for a childhood lost
    and found

    Peace, hugs and lots of smiles,
    Jill
    :-)
Comment from arunima girotra
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Hey,
Its a very sweet poem expressing so much love.. I had a smile on my face while reading it.. Thanks for sharing it..

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
    Hi arunima,,

    You are absolutely right. It is "a very sweet poem expressing so much love".
    Everything this poet lived for is in that one final sentence of this tiny poem.

    As someone much wiser than I once shared with me, god must have needed him more than I did.
    He died less than a month after I wrote this poem in the spring of 2009.

    I wrote about him in a very happy poem called "rapscallions gifts".
    I offer it, not for potential reviews...rather for your enjoyment.
    It is a celebration poem.
    Not for a birthday or a holiday but for a childhood lost
    and found

    Peace, hugs and lots of smiles,
    Jill
    :-)
Comment from chasennov
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'Only For you.' An excellent poem you wrote here which I sincerely enjoyed reading. I thought your work was rather well formulated. Well done.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
    Good morning chasennov,

    Everything this poet lived for is in that one final sentence of this tiny poem.
    As someone much wiser than I once shared with me, god must have needed him more than I did.
    He died less than a month after I wrote this poem in the spring of 2009.

    I wrote about him in a very happy poem called "rapscallions gifts".
    I offer it, not for potential reviews...for your enjoyment.
    It is a celebration poem.

    Peace, hugs and lots of smiles,
    Jill
    -:)
reply by chasennov on 23-Jun-2013
    I'm very glad you can still hug, and smile after what you've been through. Thank you, Jill.