The Battered old Bench
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Comment from krys123
Great piece justchillin. The picture is a grand old pick.
I love the imagery. So much I could smell the flowers and feel the rain. The beauty is so flamboyant that just mentioning the four types of flowers made my visual cortex to overload and downloading them, that made me think of them for hours.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013
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Great piece justchillin. The picture is a grand old pick.
I love the imagery. So much I could smell the flowers and feel the rain. The beauty is so flamboyant that just mentioning the four types of flowers made my visual cortex to overload and downloading them, that made me think of them for hours.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013
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What a lovely review. I have not written anything just off that didn't follow a format or rhyme, so this means a lot. Thank you x
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Your truly welcome justchillin.
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Thanks again xx
Comment from MoonMuse
Wonderful, vivid imagery in the short break from the rain. Very lovely flow throughout - despite using terms like "rhododendron"! :) Very lovely job.
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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013
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Wonderful, vivid imagery in the short break from the rain. Very lovely flow throughout - despite using terms like "rhododendron"! :) Very lovely job.
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Comment Written 17-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013
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Thank you for your great review. So glad I was bold enough to write something that didn't rhyme x
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
You have written an beautiful lazy poem, my friend. It was relaxing to read, each line gave its own serene feel. Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013
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You have written an beautiful lazy poem, my friend. It was relaxing to read, each line gave its own serene feel. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 17-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013
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Thank you so much. This is the first time I have written something that didnt rhyme, so looks like it was ok x
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It was wonderful!
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Wow, thanks again xx
