Thank Heaven
Wait! A wee wee light is noo cummin' oan.105 total reviews
Comment from Righteous Riter
The writer uses the aabb rhyme scheme effectively. The rhyming is good. This piece flows well as the writer does a good job of not forcing the rhymes. The photo is beautiful as the writer does a good job of holding the readers attention from beginning to end.
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The writer uses the aabb rhyme scheme effectively. The rhyming is good. This piece flows well as the writer does a good job of not forcing the rhymes. The photo is beautiful as the writer does a good job of holding the readers attention from beginning to end.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2013
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is very well written and presented my friend I liked the language used as beautiful poem indeed well done regards I enjoyed regards Jill
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Yes this is very well written and presented my friend I liked the language used as beautiful poem indeed well done regards I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 10-Jun-2013
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
This is wonderful! I listened and followed along. I love the Scottish vernacular you used... sounds great!
One error to fix:
Oan a fluer wae aw [it's] colours bright.
Oan a fluer wae aw its colours bright.
Remember the difference:
IT'S = IT IS
ITS = belongs to IT
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This is wonderful! I listened and followed along. I love the Scottish vernacular you used... sounds great!
One error to fix:
Oan a fluer wae aw [it's] colours bright.
Oan a fluer wae aw its colours bright.
Remember the difference:
IT'S = IT IS
ITS = belongs to IT
Comment Written 10-Jun-2013
Comment from Darkhorse555
from a beautiful pink rose showing the softness that lies with this piece from your clumsy heart jumping a beat a very enjoyable and beautiful piece
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from a beautiful pink rose showing the softness that lies with this piece from your clumsy heart jumping a beat a very enjoyable and beautiful piece
Comment Written 10-Jun-2013
Comment from kiwijenny
I love the Scottish vernacular. My son lived in East Kilbride and they had a wee bairn there. So it's a Brau Brecht moon licht nicht ye ken. I don't think that's right but I love it.
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I love the Scottish vernacular. My son lived in East Kilbride and they had a wee bairn there. So it's a Brau Brecht moon licht nicht ye ken. I don't think that's right but I love it.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2013
