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Comment from donette1914
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very well written story of sadness of loss ones and what a story about the one that was blind and how he could see the stars well done it was a pleasure

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
    Thank you so much for your kind review. Bill
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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What a beautiful story this is, Bill. You really have a talent for thinking up great story ideas and carrying them out wonderfully. I imagine this entry will be hard to beat. :)

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 Comment Written 09-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
    Phyllis, I consider this high praise and I am humbled that you said nice things about it. Bill