All You Have To Do Is Dream
Dreaming of her lover16 total reviews
Comment from Jade Lawson
This poem is beautiful, just my type of poems. I could feel the love and loneliness of the character, how much she misses her lover. It has a great imagery and I couldn't avoid feelings her emotions. Great poem.
It also has a good structure, artwork choice and smooth flow.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2013
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This poem is beautiful, just my type of poems. I could feel the love and loneliness of the character, how much she misses her lover. It has a great imagery and I couldn't avoid feelings her emotions. Great poem.
It also has a good structure, artwork choice and smooth flow.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2013
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Well first I want to thank for the cavalcade of stars you so graciously awarded me wow !! I am glad my words can stir your senses ..so lets hope you have the best of dreams tonight and wake up with a smile upon your lips
TK
Comment from Pili Pubul
Excellent poem. I just hope she is not dreaming her life away like the beautiful song. Love the beauty of your words, loving images of dreams.
Sad in a way. Hope last stanza becomes true... Pili
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2013
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Excellent poem. I just hope she is not dreaming her life away like the beautiful song. Love the beauty of your words, loving images of dreams.
Sad in a way. Hope last stanza becomes true... Pili
Comment Written 02-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2013
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Thank you so much Pili and If I must say so myself they did come true Wait I better ask her (SWEETI DID YOUR DREAM COME TRUE ?)Humm she doesn't seem to want to answer right now so maybe I better hold that thought HEHEHEHE
TK
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Hehehe love the poem. ...you very welcome Knight pili
Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid
Aloha ATK,
The portals of your mind are alive and well, I hope you always have such pleasant dreams. The Video and music is perfect. Sorry I don't have a "6"Star Rating. Will a "10" do. Have a blessed Sunday.
Aloha, Gingerella
Hawaiian Mermaid
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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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Aloha ATK,
The portals of your mind are alive and well, I hope you always have such pleasant dreams. The Video and music is perfect. Sorry I don't have a "6"Star Rating. Will a "10" do. Have a blessed Sunday.
Aloha, Gingerella
Hawaiian Mermaid
[Glitterfy.com - *Glitter Photos*]
Comment Written 02-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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awe just you sweet words and that special star are more than a six to me my Ms Mermaid Thank you very much
TK
Comment from Bug2013
Very touching and filled with vivid images. I read it as the longing for and hope of being reunited with a lover who has passed on. Very well-written. I am not gifted to write poetry and am in awe of artists like you who can paint such imagery confined by so many rules lol. Very well done.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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Very touching and filled with vivid images. I read it as the longing for and hope of being reunited with a lover who has passed on. Very well-written. I am not gifted to write poetry and am in awe of artists like you who can paint such imagery confined by so many rules lol. Very well done.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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WOW Thank you so very much wonderful what dreams can do sometimes isn't it Just too bad when we awake they to can disappear..Thank so much for your galaxy of stars as well !!!!!
TK
Comment from webfoot
A beautiful dream with a beautiful picture. This portrays untouchable passion in a very poetic way.
The words speak to all of the senses
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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A beautiful dream with a beautiful picture. This portrays untouchable passion in a very poetic way.
The words speak to all of the senses
Comment Written 02-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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Thank yo so very much Dreams can be beautiful but never a substitute for the warm body next to you in at night or when waking in the morn
TK
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you're welcome and right about that
Comment from Darkhorse555
like the picture at the beginning dreaming of beauty in the clouds your words exceptionaly beautiful like a river they flowed lovely piece
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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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like the picture at the beginning dreaming of beauty in the clouds your words exceptionaly beautiful like a river they flowed lovely piece
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Comment Written 02-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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thank you very much made my day
TK
