Love Unseized
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Comment from Black_Oxygen
Well Done ~ Phillippa
This word painting is full of vivid images and many
color shades. I like the way that the words are
arranged on the page. It held my interest from start
to finish. The attached photo is a befitting accent
that enhances the message. Thank Your of your creation.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2013
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Well Done ~ Phillippa
This word painting is full of vivid images and many
color shades. I like the way that the words are
arranged on the page. It held my interest from start
to finish. The attached photo is a befitting accent
that enhances the message. Thank Your of your creation.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2013
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Why thank you my friend. Very much enjoyed your review.
Cheers Phillippa
x
PS Yes this is one of the rare few photos in my posts where I feel it captures just as much perhaps as the poem. Thanks for noticing. X
Comment from Glasstruth
You've given the knight the brand new shiny armor it needs as originality drives this poem with sarcasm and the sentimental undertones that are just brilliant. Love the comparison of an unfinished Pepsi. This poem is just awesome! Les
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2013
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You've given the knight the brand new shiny armor it needs as originality drives this poem with sarcasm and the sentimental undertones that are just brilliant. Love the comparison of an unfinished Pepsi. This poem is just awesome! Les
Comment Written 01-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2013
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Wow Les, thanks so much and I'm glad you enjoyed this one to a sixer in value. The Pepsi line WAS my absolute fave and I wondered once I'd penned it would as many like it as I did. It seems YES.
Thankyou SO much. You review I shall treasure.
Cheers P
Comment from Spiritual Echo
All this for a little boy, but so effective.
wonderful range of emotions and reality touchstones in this message of being a mom....and if I'm wrong, then I'll need to go pluk some weeds.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2013
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All this for a little boy, but so effective.
wonderful range of emotions and reality touchstones in this message of being a mom....and if I'm wrong, then I'll need to go pluk some weeds.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2013
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Haha, no little boys. He ACTED like a little boy but he was NO little boy.
I think its the "bike" innuendo which was metaphor for the other minx! LOL It doesn't matter, you weren't the only one.
I DO love the different interpretations I get because no matter how clear it is in my mind, for someone reading the first time, they can have a totally different impression.
THANK YOU
Hugs Phillippa xoxo
Comment from gazzagodbod
I only popped round for some sugar i had no idea lol loved this piece it kind of flows like a waterfall for me anyway faster and faster great work xxgazzaxx
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2013
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I only popped round for some sugar i had no idea lol loved this piece it kind of flows like a waterfall for me anyway faster and faster great work xxgazzaxx
Comment Written 01-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2013
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LOL Funnee boy. Loved your review and that was NOT sugar you asked for mate! LMAO
Hugs P
x
Comment from cvcopac
Ahh, the wisdom of folly and the folly of wisdom. I like the terse, reflective and retrospective lines that are at times soft in rememberance, and at others, sharp and cutting, snappy and pointedly remorseful. The Pepsi line blew me away as did the bike. That's a scene, to me anyway, from the late forties early fifties. Enjoyable tale. Kenny
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2013
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Ahh, the wisdom of folly and the folly of wisdom. I like the terse, reflective and retrospective lines that are at times soft in rememberance, and at others, sharp and cutting, snappy and pointedly remorseful. The Pepsi line blew me away as did the bike. That's a scene, to me anyway, from the late forties early fifties. Enjoyable tale. Kenny
Comment Written 01-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2013
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Awww my special K. Thanks so much. I miss your reviews already.
Thanks so much for the beauty here and finishing on a sixer.
The Pepsi line came from nowhere but it did get re-crafted a little til I was happy, it WAS my fave. Plenty of others liked this too.
How wonderful...Glad I could return you to a younger time.
Cheers and a big send off hug
P
xxxxxxO
Comment from steevie
Interesting write, Pee. You deviated 3/4 down your poem from rhymes and then picked up again towards the end. I wonder why?
There was some realism to this wrote, that smacked of s serious nature. I'm thinking this must be autobiographical, but I'm not really sure.
The knight thing was okay, as you didn't officially use the term, My knight in shining armour. LOL
I was wondering where you had gotten to.
How is your internet thingy coming along?
Your brave for going into that stuff.
I wouldn't have a clue how to do that.
I can barely get on Hotmail and Fanstory. LOL
have a great day/evening/ morning, which ever it is for you when you read this review.
your friend
stevo the great
smiles
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2013
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Interesting write, Pee. You deviated 3/4 down your poem from rhymes and then picked up again towards the end. I wonder why?
There was some realism to this wrote, that smacked of s serious nature. I'm thinking this must be autobiographical, but I'm not really sure.
The knight thing was okay, as you didn't officially use the term, My knight in shining armour. LOL
I was wondering where you had gotten to.
How is your internet thingy coming along?
Your brave for going into that stuff.
I wouldn't have a clue how to do that.
I can barely get on Hotmail and Fanstory. LOL
have a great day/evening/ morning, which ever it is for you when you read this review.
your friend
stevo the great
smiles
Comment Written 01-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2013
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Awww thanks mate...the rhyme thing just happened where it happened. Thats what happens when I try to write free verse.
It always rhymes somewhere to hold it together.
The internet thingy is great...private message me your email and I'll give you the name. Don't want to drop it here in case I get in the shit for trying to pull free advertising for my website that sells personalised magnetic photo frames...LOL
Hugs Pee
xxx
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Don't beat yourself up, Pee. I once made a mistake back in the eighties. LMAO
cheer up, only bout forty more years until we croak! smiles
stevo aka Superman
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Don't beat yourself up, Pee. I once made a mistake back in the eighties. LMAO
cheer up, only bout forty more years until we croak! smiles
stevo
stevo aka Superman
Comment from mikenbel
Hey you! Where have you been?! My husband loves Pepsi - how funny. I like the uneven rhyming and internal rhymes you employed. It's good to see your writing again!
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2013
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Hey you! Where have you been?! My husband loves Pepsi - how funny. I like the uneven rhyming and internal rhymes you employed. It's good to see your writing again!
Comment Written 01-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2013
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Thanks mik, I appreciate your review. I'm snowed under its that simple...family has to take pref. You'd know I'm sure mate. LOL
Cheers P
x
Comment from ravenblack
You know what is the source of your knightless troubles? Pepsi. Switch to Coke for chrissakes. Seriously though, your short lined rhymer replete w/impeccable rhythm goes down smooth. References to Pepsi, getting on his bike ( probably meant motorcycle, but I visualized bike) paints a pic of Peter Pan pup immature love ( but looking back, Wendy, might have been the very thing to latch onto). " I shunned Cupid/ and let stupid reign - hah! But the reverse (I shunned stupid/ and let Cupid reign) often have the same results. Take comfort in that, I guess. Unless it's an Aussie/ Brit thing, methinks damzel should be damsel.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2013
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You know what is the source of your knightless troubles? Pepsi. Switch to Coke for chrissakes. Seriously though, your short lined rhymer replete w/impeccable rhythm goes down smooth. References to Pepsi, getting on his bike ( probably meant motorcycle, but I visualized bike) paints a pic of Peter Pan pup immature love ( but looking back, Wendy, might have been the very thing to latch onto). " I shunned Cupid/ and let stupid reign - hah! But the reverse (I shunned stupid/ and let Cupid reign) often have the same results. Take comfort in that, I guess. Unless it's an Aussie/ Brit thing, methinks damzel should be damsel.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2013
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LOL...I f**kin HATE Pepsi! So I would concur with that. Haha
Seriously though, it was the unfinished Pepsi line which started the damn poem to a degree.
Funny how somethings bug you like that. Many thanks for your richly engrossing review. MUCH appreciated my friend.
Lubb P
xx
PS Thanks for rescuing this damZel...I go fix (thanX)
Comment from Louise Michelle
Well, look who's here! Seems I can't get away from you on cyberspace, lol.
I really enjoyed this one, C.P. You chose such clever words to present an age old problem of boy and girl struggling for a relationship. Loved the bit about the Pepsi. Lightens it up. Reader doesn't feel she has to boo hoo. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2013
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Well, look who's here! Seems I can't get away from you on cyberspace, lol.
I really enjoyed this one, C.P. You chose such clever words to present an age old problem of boy and girl struggling for a relationship. Loved the bit about the Pepsi. Lightens it up. Reader doesn't feel she has to boo hoo. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 01-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2013
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Haha, my Cybysis, how are you? Thanks for the beaut review and yeah I had the Pepsi bit rolling around and it kinda worked.
Free verse not a biggie for me but every now and again I like to try one. Thanks for bearing with me...no boo hoos here babes.
Hugs and thanks again
C U around cyberspace...LMAO
Hugs C.P.
xoxo
Comment from despiser
Dwama Wabbs LOL. How goes the battle Bunns? Much to detailed to be a tail... er... tale. How'd you get the bloody lap?
Kidding aside, an interesting and nicely woven write. If you'll excuse the metaphor, excellent flow. Very unique and customized. Scuze the redundant simile too... synonym... whatever LOL.
Good stuffed Bunns... I mean good stuff Bunny
-D xx
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2013
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Dwama Wabbs LOL. How goes the battle Bunns? Much to detailed to be a tail... er... tale. How'd you get the bloody lap?
Kidding aside, an interesting and nicely woven write. If you'll excuse the metaphor, excellent flow. Very unique and customized. Scuze the redundant simile too... synonym... whatever LOL.
Good stuffed Bunns... I mean good stuff Bunny
-D xx
Comment Written 01-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2013
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Okay so its partly bio but from decades ago. Theres always one that eludes you.
You should also know Bunns always amp it up for poetic value.
How's my DEE? Got his Bunny Wabbs's book yet? I put a little something else in there for you...
Hugs
da f**kin Wabbit
xxx
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Nup. Nyet. Somefing extwa huh?
Hmmmm...
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It has magnetic pull.
LMAO
X
Should be awwiving soon hunny bun.
