Love Unseized
YOU-less...36 total reviews
Comment from ephraim crud, COS.
yeah yeah girl, you have excelled once again - turned the cliche knight into an original ride :) luvvin' this my genius one :) Connie and Eph xx
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2013
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yeah yeah girl, you have excelled once again - turned the cliche knight into an original ride :) luvvin' this my genius one :) Connie and Eph xx
Comment Written 04-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2013
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Awwww ephing marvey mate.
Thanks for the sixer and delightful commentary...
why is every one mentioning the knight? LOL
Ahh, well so long as it don't sound too cliche' hey? LMAO
Hugs to both of you.
Share them. LOL
Pee
xxx
Comment from Hitcher
Round and around and around we go, who's doing who... Sometimes it's better not to know, you know:) Was I that knight on the night in question, a thought that causes every knight to pause, before he strips off ready for the cause, that cause of bedding damsels in distress :) Got to love those knights in shining armor... One night at a time.
LOVED your poem my gifted friend, take a bow...but Make it quick I've heard some knights cum brandishing a whip, ha ha. You always make me smile :)
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2013
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Round and around and around we go, who's doing who... Sometimes it's better not to know, you know:) Was I that knight on the night in question, a thought that causes every knight to pause, before he strips off ready for the cause, that cause of bedding damsels in distress :) Got to love those knights in shining armor... One night at a time.
LOVED your poem my gifted friend, take a bow...but Make it quick I've heard some knights cum brandishing a whip, ha ha. You always make me smile :)
Comment Written 04-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2013
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LOL You're a very naughty boy. Haha
I think YOU better bow after THAT review. LOL
Thanks for smiling and sixing me up today.
Cheers P
x
Comment from Jean Lutz
I guess you taught him a thing or two about sizzle. Don't uncap and walk out. Something that was oh so good went flat. But it seems this tale ends without a winner.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2013
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I guess you taught him a thing or two about sizzle. Don't uncap and walk out. Something that was oh so good went flat. But it seems this tale ends without a winner.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2013
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Haha I did. Thanks for your delightful review.
All good here.
Cheers P
xo
Comment from emjaihammond
This really meets all expectations in a really good love poem. I enjoyed the whole piece. Such good word choices and phrases. One of the best I've read for a while. Loved this.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2013
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This really meets all expectations in a really good love poem. I enjoyed the whole piece. Such good word choices and phrases. One of the best I've read for a while. Loved this.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2013
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Wow, thanks so much. I can only tell it like it is.
Okay, I value added a little. LOL
Cheers P
Comment from NicciFaye
I really enjoyed this - great rhyming and the play of YOU-less. Excellent poem and nice stanzas. I like the whole Pespi line, thought it was cute and cheesy at the same time. LOL
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2013
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I really enjoyed this - great rhyming and the play of YOU-less. Excellent poem and nice stanzas. I like the whole Pespi line, thought it was cute and cheesy at the same time. LOL
Comment Written 03-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2013
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Thanks very much...I'd hoped for realistic and my Pepsi line was killer imo and everyone loved it so thats a home run. However the knight was flogged to death, the damzel...so cheesy and cute I can live with! LOL
Thanks muchly
P
Comment from catch22
Wow P, you've gone and turned the old knight clich© into a real and poignant memory of first love. I love this story poem. It works for me on so many levels and tells a tale of longing and heartbreak. Yep, we always hold our first love up on a pedestal because it's the first. This really tugged at my heart because it was told in a real manner and not embellished or romanticized. I loved the image of a knight in a bike:) Wonderful write.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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Wow P, you've gone and turned the old knight clich© into a real and poignant memory of first love. I love this story poem. It works for me on so many levels and tells a tale of longing and heartbreak. Yep, we always hold our first love up on a pedestal because it's the first. This really tugged at my heart because it was told in a real manner and not embellished or romanticized. I loved the image of a knight in a bike:) Wonderful write.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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Thanks very much my friend. I really appreciate the sixer and your epic review. Yep that first one hangs on for a bit. LOL
Hugs Phillippa
xo
Comment from Jaq Cee
Welll, Pippalicious, this really is delicious, you maybe let love go, but it has helped you grow. Some things are not meant to be, so quell the angst and just be free.
Love the very strong rhyming and the presentation of this one girlie. Well worth a sixer. Take care Pippa :) Hugs, Jaq xx
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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Welll, Pippalicious, this really is delicious, you maybe let love go, but it has helped you grow. Some things are not meant to be, so quell the angst and just be free.
Love the very strong rhyming and the presentation of this one girlie. Well worth a sixer. Take care Pippa :) Hugs, Jaq xx
Comment Written 02-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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Yes my friend. I feel like I've preserved in a glass case the love that never was and will forever never be. Partly my fault, mostly his. LOL We live and learn. Then we play the cards we're dealt and lie in the bed we made ourselves. It DOES make for some great poetry though right? LOL
Thanks for a sterling review and this unfinished Pepsi is good to go...haha
Hugs Pippagodamnlicious xxx
Comment from rhymelord
Dear Phillippa,
Wow! The pace of this had my poor old heart pounding and the broken rhythm with the all wrong rhyme scheme didn't matter a damn. You are the most accomplished user of modern idiom and plain language on this site making your work topical and dynamically vivid. I do hope you have got your love life sorted out, or maybe not... the dilemma seems to inspire you. You're not a bad poet either. LOL
Best regards
Reg
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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Dear Phillippa,
Wow! The pace of this had my poor old heart pounding and the broken rhythm with the all wrong rhyme scheme didn't matter a damn. You are the most accomplished user of modern idiom and plain language on this site making your work topical and dynamically vivid. I do hope you have got your love life sorted out, or maybe not... the dilemma seems to inspire you. You're not a bad poet either. LOL
Best regards
Reg
Comment Written 02-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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Wow Reggie, what a review. Thankyou so much my friend for your enchanting words. The love life is well sorted but this one still haunts me now and again...glad this was so vivid for you and again, thanks for the beaut review and sixer rating.
Hugs Phillippa
xo
Comment from Connie C
I really, really like this, sweetie. You're telling a story here, perhaps more common than we might think, of perhaps the love of one's life who takes off in pursuit of another, only to return and be rejected. Reminds me of my daughter's relationship with her ex-boyfriend before she met her husband.
With your usual command of language, you tell this delicious little story, and your rhyme is there but not so obvious with the way you've played with the lines and their spacing. Just brilliant, my dear, but then I expect no less from you!
The person in the image you chose kind of looks like you. Is that you?
I'm happy I get to give you a sixer on this--well deserved!
Big Hugs,
Connie xoxoxo
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2013
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I really, really like this, sweetie. You're telling a story here, perhaps more common than we might think, of perhaps the love of one's life who takes off in pursuit of another, only to return and be rejected. Reminds me of my daughter's relationship with her ex-boyfriend before she met her husband.
With your usual command of language, you tell this delicious little story, and your rhyme is there but not so obvious with the way you've played with the lines and their spacing. Just brilliant, my dear, but then I expect no less from you!
The person in the image you chose kind of looks like you. Is that you?
I'm happy I get to give you a sixer on this--well deserved!
Big Hugs,
Connie xoxoxo
Comment Written 02-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2013
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Awww thankyou. I really, really, REALLY liked your review.
Sounds like me and the daughter might have some common ground. LOL
Ahh, there's always ONE that lives on a little in your heart and you can't help but wonder at circumstance.
Thanks for the sixer and wonderful review. I appreciate the encouragement as you know free verse not my strength.
Hugs Phillippa xoxoxo
Hi to Bill ~
Comment from Winslow
Dear Closetpoet,
A love once had and now it's gone, you mourned and felt so alone, but wait the knight does return and with a smile the pepsi he tries to down. But you said no and regrets now rule, with this knight you had a love duel.
Warm regards,
Winslow
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2013
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Dear Closetpoet,
A love once had and now it's gone, you mourned and felt so alone, but wait the knight does return and with a smile the pepsi he tries to down. But you said no and regrets now rule, with this knight you had a love duel.
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 01-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2013
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Thanks very much Winslow. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. Your review in rhyme is welcomed and appreciated.
Cheers P
