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From out of the Grayness

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Reaching from the gray areas to understand life

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Comment from NicciFaye
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What if there was a GPS for our mind, now wouldn't that be something...brilliant write and I enjoyed this a lot, something for folks to ponder on. But if it was a GPS and God programmed it, then the Bible would have to be rewritten..... lol ;-)

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2013
    Thank you NicciFaye...I'm delighted that your liked this and yes, those things in the Bible that spin FEAR are certainly a quandary that does make one question why when GOD is very clear, it's LOVE (GOD) OR FEAR (NOT GOD). Hmmmmm? Blessings Vance
Comment from Spitfire
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What an ingenious idea. Kind of like radar to help us find our way. Hey, I guess that is prayer. You do bring that into the read.
Then some fool cuts you off without thinking
You swerve down the alley to miss a crash
While the GPS starts screaming "FEAR" alley
As you thought a "Mad" light should be blinking

A wonderful read between the lines poem.

 Comment Written 31-May-2013


reply by the author on 31-May-2013
    Thanks so much my dear Spitfire! It is always a joy to hear from you and learn from such a GIFTED writer! I'm a bit off the main street sometimes to try and stretch the imagination.. especially with anything spiritual which in an of itself is truly on a street of billowing fast moving clouds to most people! Thanks again for your kind review and stay tuned!! Vance
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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I read a book once called "Conversations With God". Somehow I related to the concept of that entire book. Wouldn't put it down as it seemed to zone in on my entire life's precept of what goes on and how it should. Fear is a recognizable sign that Satan is having a laugh at our expense then someone like yourself comes up with the idea that if we had a programmed GPS we could and would stay on the right path. But, I have to wonder if dealing with the wrong steps lead us to exactly where we are supposed to be ... this one gave me cause to ponder. Thanks V. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 30-May-2013


reply by the author on 30-May-2013
    Thanks Kiwi for you kind review. I also read that book and found it to be remarkably profound and frankly 'TOO HARD FOR SOMEONE TO MAKE IT UP" I personally believe God will speak to anyone who will listen which was the purpose of my recent post entitled
    HEAR ME NOW. NO doubt it's time for our world to LISTEN! Blessings: Vance
Comment from mikenbel
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You are right - the human experience has a hard time focusing in on what we want - and even when we do - it's not permanent. I wish I had one of those GPSs for bad intentions - or avoiding them. How true the whole poem. I can totally identify with the last stanza!

 Comment Written 29-May-2013


reply by the author on 30-May-2013
    thanks so much for you kind review and I am really glad that you could relate to this message. I hope it helps you in your life and your prayers. Blessings: Vance
Comment from mystery poet
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This is so far out creative, so weird and beyond
beleif. So compelling it takes one to the unimaginable
where it has a life of it's own. Scary to think
about, but holds some truth in that we all have
fears, such as fear of the unknown. You broach the
subject of love in conjunction with God as being
in charge of those streets of life. Had to give
this six, you've been doing lots of thinking...

 Comment Written 29-May-2013


reply by the author on 30-May-2013
    Thank you so much for your very encouraging and stimulating review. I am truly honored and hope that many will be willing to consider the reality of Love versus Fear and try stick with love in the face of everything as it is the only hope for our world! Blessing and gratitude! Vance
reply by mystery poet on 31-May-2013
    Always a pleasure to release a six
    where it should be.Joyce
Comment from reconciled
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Hey Fox...-smile- how are you sir...? when them things first came out I avoided them like the plague....now...i'm lost without it...lol...anyway Exceptional write..love Michael

 Comment Written 29-May-2013


reply by the author on 29-May-2013
    Thanks Michael....always great to hear from you! Vance
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Vance I'm very impressed with your thoughts of would it would be like if we had a GPS within our brain and this phrase-- Brillant

Perhaps God would be willing to program it
With the GPS name "God's Plain & Simple"

Gert

 Comment Written 29-May-2013


reply by the author on 29-May-2013
    Dear Gert: Thank you so much....your comments mean so much to me and I'm thrilled that you enjoyed this. Blessings! Vance
reply by Gert sherwood on 29-May-2013
    You are very welcome Vance

    Gert
Comment from Sam Mendonca
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I like how you use a GPS to relate to life. A very clever idea.

In LOVE you are creative, with GOD, and joy abounds
But when in FEAR, you have chosen to turn away
You will find darkness, anger, pain and suffering
And your GPS making loud and ugly warning sounds

So true!

 Comment Written 29-May-2013


reply by the author on 29-May-2013
    Dear Sam: Wonderful to meet you and delighted to get you comments on this work...much appreciated and I hope we get to know each other better!! All the very best: Vance
reply by Sam Mendonca on 29-May-2013
    You're very welcome.
Comment from Darkhorse555
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the sphere of beautiful colours gods love shines through bringing light to darkness in this ever so beautiful piece I enjoyed

 Comment Written 29-May-2013


reply by the author on 29-May-2013
    Darkhorse: wonderful to hear from you and many thanks for you generous comments. I hope we will share more words and thoughts soon and often! Blessings, Vance