Comment from robina1978

Excellent

A nice and complicated puzzle by the looks of it. You described very well in this poem how you went about this tedious work. Nice the last bit in mono-rhyme.

 Comment Written 29-May-2013

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reply by the author on 29-May-2013

Thank you Ine. Took about 6 weeks to assemble.

reply by robina1978 on 29-May-2013

Must have done, looks very difficult. Ine

Comment from NicciFaye

Excellent

Awesome puzzle and great picture you took. The puzzle poem you pieced together is perfect...lol

These type of poems are my fav from you.

 Comment Written 29-May-2013

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reply by the author on 29-May-2013

Thank you Nicci. Glad to share.

Comment from ravenblack

Excellent

You must have the patience of a saint. You ever try one of those puzzles where all the pieces are cut the same or three-d puzzles? Anyway, quatrains and closing mono rhymes was a good choice for this piece- precise and fitting together like a puzzle.

 Comment Written 28-May-2013

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reply by the author on 29-May-2013

Thank you Ravenblack. Yes, I've done a 3d ancient globe, and the Titanic, the 3 2000 piece ones, I've framed- DaVinci's Last Supper, Van Gogh's Starry Night, and this one, Alpende's Workshed.

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

Congratulations on the jigsaw puzzle. I might remember Hallmark with a few 5000 piece jp's also. It's something to investigate.

Good rhymed quatrains poem. Excellent work.

 Comment Written 28-May-2013

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reply by the author on 28-May-2013

Thank you sunnilicious. That is worth looking into.

Comment from shard

Excellent

Great work Treischel! Whilst I'm not personally much of a puzzle builder, I found this story managed to give it a feel of thrill and excitement I wasn't expecting. It had a very strong opening instantly setting the scene and I loved picturing you and your wife standing there ever so proudly admiring your finished master piece. I can't find any grammatical errors and really enjoyed reading it. Good job and congrats on finishing the puzzle!

 Comment Written 28-May-2013

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reply by the author on 28-May-2013

Thank you shard you sharing my enjoyment.

Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart

Excellent

What an awesome puzzle and what a job it must have been, but it should have been fun. The poem is a real neat finisher to the project. You should frame it and put it beside the puzzle. Great piece. God loves you and I do too.

 Comment Written 28-May-2013

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reply by the author on 28-May-2013

Thank you Evelyn. I just might do that.

Comment from whubbard7

Excellent

Excellent! Congratulations on finishing your puzzle... I remember finishing my largest puzzle, it was only 1000 pieces though. I literally leaped for joy for ten minutes, then I wept for an hour after my 6 year old cousin destroyed it before my eyes! Nice work, I like the ten syllable parameters, it makes the poem a challenge as well, and you succeeded!
~William

 Comment Written 28-May-2013

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reply by the author on 28-May-2013

Thank you William. That would be tough to watch the 6 year old tear it apart.

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

So good this one Treischel. It felt like you were writing about way more than the completion of a puzzle ... I like how you bring words together to give your reader something to think about. xoxo Kiwi

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 Comment Written 28-May-2013

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reply by the author on 28-May-2013

Thank you Kiwigirl. I appreciate your encouragement.

Comment from mikenbel

Excellent

I love the picture - it is so nostalgic and old-fashioned. So this is an actual puzzle that you did! I love puzzles - I did a 2000 piecer when I was 5. What a well written poem!

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 Comment Written 28-May-2013

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reply by the author on 28-May-2013

Thank you so much mikenbel.