Along the Jericho Road
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "Kuta Moon, Part 1"Murder Mystery
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Comment from c_lucas
Sometimes a smile is more then just pleasure, it can be construed as competitive, or a challenge. This is very well written. Good job.
reply by the author on 28-May-2013
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Sometimes a smile is more then just pleasure, it can be construed as competitive, or a challenge. This is very well written. Good job.
Comment Written 28-May-2013
reply by the author on 28-May-2013
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Good point, charlie. We're on the same wavelength. Thanks for the support, I really appreciate. :0) Bev
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You're welcome, Bev. Charlie
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
As I haven't been following this book, I cannot comment on how the storyline is going. I can comment on your grammar, which is fine. Thank you for sharing.
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As I haven't been following this book, I cannot comment on how the storyline is going. I can comment on your grammar, which is fine. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 28-May-2013
reply by the author on 28-May-2013
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Thanks so much for stopping by and for the excellent rating.
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
Written with an educated eye as to how native lore is interpreted by Wasicu. Using the ride back to HQ is a sensible vehicle (pardon the pun) in which to tell the reader who's who and what's what. Sparse dialogue, without SPAG enhances a growing sense of unease on Rick's part. A good read..looking forward to more.
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Written with an educated eye as to how native lore is interpreted by Wasicu. Using the ride back to HQ is a sensible vehicle (pardon the pun) in which to tell the reader who's who and what's what. Sparse dialogue, without SPAG enhances a growing sense of unease on Rick's part. A good read..looking forward to more.
Regards:
Comment Written 28-May-2013
reply by the author on 28-May-2013
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Stephen, thank you so much for this excellent review. I really appreciate your insights into the technical side of the chapter. I always find that so helpful. Much appreciate your support and interest. Warm regards, Bev
Comment from judiverse
You give a great description of Jana's plight as she tries to walk between her work as a police officer and her standing as a Native American. She goes along with not making too much of her uncle's claim that a dead person was getting someone living to do his or her bidding. Spooky. The feeling is that this is a professional killer, one who doesn't make mistakes. Enter the hot shot profiler. Love that name Dresden Stredwick III. Sounds like he's on TV a lot. He should be an interesting character added to the mix. Wonder if the killer will spook him. judi
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You give a great description of Jana's plight as she tries to walk between her work as a police officer and her standing as a Native American. She goes along with not making too much of her uncle's claim that a dead person was getting someone living to do his or her bidding. Spooky. The feeling is that this is a professional killer, one who doesn't make mistakes. Enter the hot shot profiler. Love that name Dresden Stredwick III. Sounds like he's on TV a lot. He should be an interesting character added to the mix. Wonder if the killer will spook him. judi
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Comment Written 28-May-2013
reply by the author on 28-May-2013
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Thanks so much, Judi. I love this review. You're reading my mind again! Yes, the killer will have a, let's just say, strong reaction to Dresden. Much appreciate your support, my friend.
Hugs, Bev
Comment from Peppy1105
GREAT! I especially liked the gripping start that made it easy to continue reading. If a story has a catchy start, readers have more incentive to continue reading. It caught my attention:)
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GREAT! I especially liked the gripping start that made it easy to continue reading. If a story has a catchy start, readers have more incentive to continue reading. It caught my attention:)
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Comment Written 28-May-2013
reply by the author on 28-May-2013
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Why, thanks so much for this great review, Peppy. I'm thrilled you found the opening 'gripping'. Much appreciate your time and support. Bev
