All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Buried Treasure"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from K.W.
How wonderful Sharyn. What a lovely, intricate and imaginative tribute to your father and your past. I absolutely love that you close by coupling the 17 year old with the future. Wink indeed!!
i hate cutting and pasting but the following are magnificent and i wanted you to know:
all tear-drops, like the shapes of the memories themselves.- lovely and poignant
There was one bakery for Aussie meat pies'n peas that I would have
crossed more than seven seas for, just to share in the shadow of the light-house,
with only the windsong, and the chorused blowing of grasses
and my dad for company.- big fat wonderful sigh
Xx
K
reply by the author on 28-May-2013
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How wonderful Sharyn. What a lovely, intricate and imaginative tribute to your father and your past. I absolutely love that you close by coupling the 17 year old with the future. Wink indeed!!
i hate cutting and pasting but the following are magnificent and i wanted you to know:
all tear-drops, like the shapes of the memories themselves.- lovely and poignant
There was one bakery for Aussie meat pies'n peas that I would have
crossed more than seven seas for, just to share in the shadow of the light-house,
with only the windsong, and the chorused blowing of grasses
and my dad for company.- big fat wonderful sigh
Xx
K
Comment Written 28-May-2013
reply by the author on 28-May-2013
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I love creating those big, fat, wonderful sighs KW dear - thank you SO much! :)))Sharyn
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Well done lady:)
Xx
K
Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid
Aloha Sharyn,
What a beautiful poem of memories of your Dad. It brought back memories of my dear dad. I felt like I was going down memory lane with you. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Have a beautiful Memorial Day.
Aloha, Ginger
Hawaiian Mermaid
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reply by the author on 28-May-2013
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Aloha Sharyn,
What a beautiful poem of memories of your Dad. It brought back memories of my dear dad. I felt like I was going down memory lane with you. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Have a beautiful Memorial Day.
Aloha, Ginger
Hawaiian Mermaid
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Comment Written 27-May-2013
reply by the author on 28-May-2013
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Bless you Ginger - I always enjoy your techie glitter! :)Sharyn
Comment from 3boysrule
Nothing like a great treasure to be found :-) I have tried my hand at metal detecting. The most we've found was some old bottles. It was super cool. So, I enjoyed your writing! I'd like to see where she goes and what she finds. Very enjoyable!
Dee
reply by the author on 28-May-2013
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Nothing like a great treasure to be found :-) I have tried my hand at metal detecting. The most we've found was some old bottles. It was super cool. So, I enjoyed your writing! I'd like to see where she goes and what she finds. Very enjoyable!
Dee
Comment Written 27-May-2013
reply by the author on 28-May-2013
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Thank you so much Dee! Metal detector, hmm? only time I used one was to find a survey peg which was located where I thought it was and put paid to our neighbor's claims. Now THAT was fun! :) :)
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hello there Sharyn
Dear Lady, you are indeed a Wrod Smith. I loved this tribute to your father. You paint such vivid pictures, that it was easy to be right there with you on that adventure
Bear
reply by the author on 28-May-2013
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Hello there Sharyn
Dear Lady, you are indeed a Wrod Smith. I loved this tribute to your father. You paint such vivid pictures, that it was easy to be right there with you on that adventure
Bear
Comment Written 27-May-2013
reply by the author on 28-May-2013
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Bless you dear Bear, as always ...
Comment from Taffspride
A beautiful story and tribute to your father, who must have been a special person indeed.
As I read your words, I pictured that young seventeen year old, enjoying those moments with her dad. Something that some of us never had. But I enjoyed them vicariously through your poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Iechyd da
Ann
reply by the author on 27-May-2013
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A beautiful story and tribute to your father, who must have been a special person indeed.
As I read your words, I pictured that young seventeen year old, enjoying those moments with her dad. Something that some of us never had. But I enjoyed them vicariously through your poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Iechyd da
Ann
Comment Written 27-May-2013
reply by the author on 27-May-2013
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I always love your reviews, Ann - and I'm always honored that you are warmed by my writing. I'm very much 'warmed' in return, my dear. And I wanted to let you know how much I appreciate you.
big hugs
Sharyn
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Hugs and smiles back Sharyn xx
Comment from MizKat
Sharyn - This is a very nice poem about your father and the trip your went on with him. I enjoyed the read very much as I read your free verse poem. Kat
reply by the author on 27-May-2013
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Sharyn - This is a very nice poem about your father and the trip your went on with him. I enjoyed the read very much as I read your free verse poem. Kat
Comment Written 27-May-2013
reply by the author on 27-May-2013
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Bless you Kat! :)S
Comment from nancyjam
I enjoyed reading your reminiscing about your father
brought on by finding a box of earrings.
Love the specific details which invites the reader
into the scene.
Lovely memories poignantly told. A beautiful write.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-May-2013
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I enjoyed reading your reminiscing about your father
brought on by finding a box of earrings.
Love the specific details which invites the reader
into the scene.
Lovely memories poignantly told. A beautiful write.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-May-2013
reply by the author on 27-May-2013
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thx Nancy! :)Sharyn
Comment from Gungalo
Wrestling with the old-fashioned clasp, I give her a wink
as she embarks upon the search for buried treasure
mapped by her father, whose ship has long since sailed. She
sniffs the winds of the unknown, wondering ... about the journey ahead.
This is surely an epoch write girl with a wonderful ending for your daughter. I send her all the hope in the world.
reply by the author on 27-May-2013
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Wrestling with the old-fashioned clasp, I give her a wink
as she embarks upon the search for buried treasure
mapped by her father, whose ship has long since sailed. She
sniffs the winds of the unknown, wondering ... about the journey ahead.
This is surely an epoch write girl with a wonderful ending for your daughter. I send her all the hope in the world.
Comment Written 27-May-2013
reply by the author on 27-May-2013
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thx so much Pam! :)Sharyn
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Smile Sharyn.
Comment from Selina Stambi
My heart contracted as I absorbed the depth of the warmth in your relationship with your Dad, Sharyn.
Mine was a remote, distant one.
The free verse flows like a gentle stream ... almost like prose.
A worthy candidate for the contest, my dear Twin!
reply by the author on 27-May-2013
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My heart contracted as I absorbed the depth of the warmth in your relationship with your Dad, Sharyn.
Mine was a remote, distant one.
The free verse flows like a gentle stream ... almost like prose.
A worthy candidate for the contest, my dear Twin!
Comment Written 27-May-2013
reply by the author on 27-May-2013
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bless you Twinnie - yes, I was so lucky in my dad - he was someone so special. My mother was WAY more problematic!
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My mum is my best friend - so in this we are mirror image twins! xxx
Comment from carlwayne
I liked this poem and I enjoyed reading it..................
.......................................................................God Bless!
reply by the author on 27-May-2013
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I liked this poem and I enjoyed reading it..................
.......................................................................God Bless!
Comment Written 27-May-2013
reply by the author on 27-May-2013
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oh dear Carl - you do need to give a real review please - dots just don't cut it dear. I'm sure you'd expect the same when someone reviews YOUR work, yes? I'm glad you liked it though!
:)Sharyn
