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Comment from Gungalo
Twisting Tornado
tragic tales and troubled times
Evil Wind that blows
Surely it is Tom and clearly a lot of damage was done. Sigh, my hear t goes out to them too.
reply by the author on 22-May-2013
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Twisting Tornado
tragic tales and troubled times
Evil Wind that blows
Surely it is Tom and clearly a lot of damage was done. Sigh, my hear t goes out to them too.
Comment Written 22-May-2013
reply by the author on 22-May-2013
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Thank you Gungalo.
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Smile Tom.
Comment from Capricorn30
"Twisting Tornado"
"Evil Wind that blows"
A powerful writing which parallels the horror of demonic destruction.
My heart goes out to these people, Tom.
reply by the author on 22-May-2013
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"Twisting Tornado"
"Evil Wind that blows"
A powerful writing which parallels the horror of demonic destruction.
My heart goes out to these people, Tom.
Comment Written 22-May-2013
reply by the author on 22-May-2013
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Thank you Capricorn, what a tragic disaster.
Comment from NicciFaye
I was hoping to see a poem dedicated to Oklahoma, glad you did it. I have a hard time writing about personal things like that..don't know why...haven't really tired, but its alreay trageic as it is...Excellent write.
reply by the author on 22-May-2013
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I was hoping to see a poem dedicated to Oklahoma, glad you did it. I have a hard time writing about personal things like that..don't know why...haven't really tired, but its alreay trageic as it is...Excellent write.
Comment Written 22-May-2013
reply by the author on 22-May-2013
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Thank you Nicci. I was so tragic to think about those school kids.
Comment from 4tun81
This is a wonderful and timely piece. It has great alliteration and is very descriptive. Our thought go to our brothers and sisters in Oklahoma in their time of need.
reply by the author on 22-May-2013
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This is a wonderful and timely piece. It has great alliteration and is very descriptive. Our thought go to our brothers and sisters in Oklahoma in their time of need.
Comment Written 22-May-2013
reply by the author on 22-May-2013
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Thank you 4tun81.
Comment from ravenblack
with you on this one. had the radio on today ( n.p.r.) and heard an interview with a mother whose daughter survived being in the leveled school. she was crying during the interview and all I can say is driving with tears in your eyes is not the easiest thing to do.
reply by the author on 22-May-2013
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with you on this one. had the radio on today ( n.p.r.) and heard an interview with a mother whose daughter survived being in the leveled school. she was crying during the interview and all I can say is driving with tears in your eyes is not the easiest thing to do.
Comment Written 22-May-2013
reply by the author on 22-May-2013
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Thank you Ravenblack. I hear you. It was devastating.
Comment from Callyope
Wow love, this is a great 5-7-5! It packs a huge punch with just 17 short syllables... It's as if the winds were speaking to you when you wrote this! Great job!!!
Your Friend,
Talesha
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reply by the author on 22-May-2013
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Wow love, this is a great 5-7-5! It packs a huge punch with just 17 short syllables... It's as if the winds were speaking to you when you wrote this! Great job!!!
Your Friend,
Talesha
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Comment Written 22-May-2013
reply by the author on 22-May-2013
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Thank you Talesha. I'm am pleased with your response.
