Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Poor

Hello my friend I must say this is not only in the wrong format but it is also all in caps which appears as if you are shouting a 5/7/5 poem is three lines amounting to 17 syllables this needs total rewrite regards Jill

 Comment Written 22-May-2013

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reply by the author on 23-May-2013

Thank you madam I will rectify your comments in the future.

reply by Anonymous Member on 23-May-2013

Thank you madam, I will rectify your comments

reply by Anonymous Member on 23-May-2013

Thank you madam, I will rectify your comments

reply by Anonymous Member on 23-May-2013

Thank you madam, I will rectify your comments

Comment from NicciFaye

Good

This women was excellent. The only thing that got me is the capitalization with all the "ssss" really plays tricks on the eyes.

 Comment Written 22-May-2013

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reply by the author on 23-May-2013

Thank you madam