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Comment from Kidlike101
nice poem though the flow was a bit off in the middle. not sure the "Adieu!" in the end was needed, it seemed out of place to me. keep writing and best of luck with the contest
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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nice poem though the flow was a bit off in the middle. not sure the "Adieu!" in the end was needed, it seemed out of place to me. keep writing and best of luck with the contest
Comment Written 20-May-2013
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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Thanks
Comment from Kylieflower
This was a good poem. I like the Shakespearean Style you wrote this in. Good job, and good luck with the contest. The picture is awesome as well!!
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reply by the author on 19-May-2013
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This was a good poem. I like the Shakespearean Style you wrote this in. Good job, and good luck with the contest. The picture is awesome as well!!
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Comment Written 19-May-2013
reply by the author on 19-May-2013
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Thank you Kylieflower.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I think the humor in this merited 5 stars. It was funny, to the point, and easy to understand. I think you want "Adieu" and not "Adeau." A very fun read.
reply by the author on 19-May-2013
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I think the humor in this merited 5 stars. It was funny, to the point, and easy to understand. I think you want "Adieu" and not "Adeau." A very fun read.
Comment Written 19-May-2013
reply by the author on 19-May-2013
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Thank you Crystue. I think you are right.
Comment from mickbey
A very fine piece of work, tight and precise, a good job of setting the scene and taking us into the time and place, a consistent and clever story, high quality writing and an entertaining read.
reply by the author on 19-May-2013
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A very fine piece of work, tight and precise, a good job of setting the scene and taking us into the time and place, a consistent and clever story, high quality writing and an entertaining read.
Comment Written 19-May-2013
reply by the author on 19-May-2013
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Thanks mickbey, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Jean Lutz
The fickleness of love displayed well in sonnet form. Dramatic artwork and color scheme work in harmony with the words. Best wishes with the entry.
reply by the author on 19-May-2013
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The fickleness of love displayed well in sonnet form. Dramatic artwork and color scheme work in harmony with the words. Best wishes with the entry.
Comment Written 19-May-2013
reply by the author on 19-May-2013
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Thank you so much Jean. It was a fun write.
Comment from Jade Lawson
You did good according to what is asked in this contest. Good artwork choice and words used, it flows smoothly in every stanza.
Good wrhyming scheme and attained imagery. Enjoyed to read.
Good luck :)
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reply by the author on 19-May-2013
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You did good according to what is asked in this contest. Good artwork choice and words used, it flows smoothly in every stanza.
Good wrhyming scheme and attained imagery. Enjoyed to read.
Good luck :)
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Comment Written 19-May-2013
reply by the author on 19-May-2013
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Thank you Angel. I look forward to the contest.
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The best of luck, you did very well, I like your writing :)
