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Igniting senses17 total reviews
Comment from jlsavell
Ronni, and how this exquisite work captivates and ignites the senses. Truly. Love the imagery and the sensual dimension of this work .I understand why it is nominated.. wonderful work.. jlsavell
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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Ronni, and how this exquisite work captivates and ignites the senses. Truly. Love the imagery and the sensual dimension of this work .I understand why it is nominated.. wonderful work.. jlsavell
Comment Written 23-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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Thank you for your kind and thoughtful review, and glad
you appreicaited the presentation, sharing your supportive
thouths and comments. I just read your poem in this contest
too, and wow... review was a misty eyed one for sure. Totally
stunning and compelling is your entry! Best of luck and
best wishes.....Ronni
Comment from emjaihammond
This is passionate and inventive. I love this style and the presentation of this piece is gorgeous. Really stylish and a beautiful read as well.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2013
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This is passionate and inventive. I love this style and the presentation of this piece is gorgeous. Really stylish and a beautiful read as well.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2013
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Thank you for your most appreciative and complimentary review!
Sincerely appreciated, happiest and best reward is that you
enjoyed it so well! Best wishes always....Ronni
Comment from mountainwriter49
Hi, Ronni
I enjoyed your sensuous, salsa poem. it was alluring, interesting
and allowed the reader to let his mind run wild with the vivid
imagery created by your well chosen words. The brevity of the lines
and the manner in which the thoughts, no the senses, were projected
onto the page were most creative.
Well done, and good luck to you in the contest.
-ray
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013
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Hi, Ronni
I enjoyed your sensuous, salsa poem. it was alluring, interesting
and allowed the reader to let his mind run wild with the vivid
imagery created by your well chosen words. The brevity of the lines
and the manner in which the thoughts, no the senses, were projected
onto the page were most creative.
Well done, and good luck to you in the contest.
-ray
Comment Written 17-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013
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Thank you ray, for your very appreicative and articulate
review, most pleased you enjoyed it and shared your kind
and complimentary thoughts and comments. And the well
wishes for contest. Best wishes always....Ronni
Comment from samandlancelot
Ronni,
I like your buildup to the main event, fulfillment, and restful, dreamy sleep that follows.
E C I P S I N G (eclipsing)
over and over
Patricia
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013
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Ronni,
I like your buildup to the main event, fulfillment, and restful, dreamy sleep that follows.
E C I P S I N G (eclipsing)
over and over
Patricia
Comment Written 17-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013
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Thank you Patricia, for appreciating this poem and sharing
your kind thoughts and lovely compliments. Also, thans for
tip on missing letter ...have fixed it... appreciate it.
Happy you enjoyed it. Best wishes always....Ronni
Comment from MissMerri
A lovely and passionate poem by a truly passionate artist. I loved everything about this one, Ronni. I know it will be a huge vote-getter and congratulations for having your work nominated for POM. That alone, is a wonderful honor. I'm delighted!
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013
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A lovely and passionate poem by a truly passionate artist. I loved everything about this one, Ronni. I know it will be a huge vote-getter and congratulations for having your work nominated for POM. That alone, is a wonderful honor. I'm delighted!
Comment Written 17-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013
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Thank you dear Merri...this POM nomtination was total surprise
to me...there are so many outstanding entries! Sincerely
appreciate your enthusiasm and support, and so happy you
emjoyed it so well. Best wishes always....hugs...Ronni
MANY THANKS TOO FOR EXTRA STAR!!!!
Comment from mohiro
Wildly imaginative! You have stretched the poetic license to wildest limit imaginable. You got me fired up!
Words, bold and brazen, from you joggle my brains from time to time. Thanks for leading the way. This is clearly a magnum opus.
Warmest regards,
Mohiro
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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Wildly imaginative! You have stretched the poetic license to wildest limit imaginable. You got me fired up!
Words, bold and brazen, from you joggle my brains from time to time. Thanks for leading the way. This is clearly a magnum opus.
Warmest regards,
Mohiro
Comment Written 20-May-2013
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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Thank you dear mohiro, for your marvelous review and
appreciation of this presentation and topic. So very
pleased you enjoyed, and indeed, extra thanks for the
extra star! Your spirit is marvelous!
Very best wishes always...Ronni
Comment from Laurent Andre Menot
Really great piece of poetry.
Very original and interesting form of writing.
I like the style, and the way you wrote and expressed passion.
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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Really great piece of poetry.
Very original and interesting form of writing.
I like the style, and the way you wrote and expressed passion.
Comment Written 19-May-2013
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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Thank you for your thoughtful and appreciative review,
sincerely appreciated. Happy you like the style and
presentation, that is most encouragin to know.
Very best wishes to you always...Ronni
Comment from Louise Michelle
Yikes! This one is really hot, girl. The presentation really shows the passion with those bold words in CAPS.
You absolutely conveyed the experience of orgasm with your creative word choices. Well done! Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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Yikes! This one is really hot, girl. The presentation really shows the passion with those bold words in CAPS.
You absolutely conveyed the experience of orgasm with your creative word choices. Well done! Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 19-May-2013
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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Thanks Lou...glad this one wassn't 'too hot' for you...
and happy you enjoyed it! Your support always very
endearing... hugs....Ronni
Comment from Jade Lawson
Great imagery, I really liked the format of separation of the stanzas of this poem. The artwork also gave life to the poem and the meaning of your words. Really good chosen words and nice alliteration.
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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Great imagery, I really liked the format of separation of the stanzas of this poem. The artwork also gave life to the poem and the meaning of your words. Really good chosen words and nice alliteration.
Comment Written 19-May-2013
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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Thank you Angel, so pleased you enjoyed this bit of a
different format and presentation. Always nice to
experiment with something new...so glad it pleased you.
Very best wishes always....Ronni
Comment from DBastian
Ronni! You are on fire. Wow! What thoughts and ... actions. I can only imagine. The visions that you portray ... visions most can only dream of!
OK, your vocabulary is immense ... on par with your passion, I am sure. I see so many words fly by from your poems, reviews and responses, that I give up looking them all up. However, I am wondering about surrebder ... Either you mistyped or I just learned something new about you ... that your poetry is also about made up words ... which is not a bad idea ... I do like made up words ... when ever there is an action, especially an emotion that goes beyond description, then a new word is the appropriate response ... smiling, especially when so much passion is involved and we just cry out whatever syllable comes to our mind at the time ...
Anyway, lovely ... entertaining ... exuding with passion ... very relatable. Nice expression ... I am not sure if I should say nice job ... certainly an enjoyable one
Regards
Dave
reply by the author on 19-May-2013
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Ronni! You are on fire. Wow! What thoughts and ... actions. I can only imagine. The visions that you portray ... visions most can only dream of!
OK, your vocabulary is immense ... on par with your passion, I am sure. I see so many words fly by from your poems, reviews and responses, that I give up looking them all up. However, I am wondering about surrebder ... Either you mistyped or I just learned something new about you ... that your poetry is also about made up words ... which is not a bad idea ... I do like made up words ... when ever there is an action, especially an emotion that goes beyond description, then a new word is the appropriate response ... smiling, especially when so much passion is involved and we just cry out whatever syllable comes to our mind at the time ...
Anyway, lovely ... entertaining ... exuding with passion ... very relatable. Nice expression ... I am not sure if I should say nice job ... certainly an enjoyable one
Regards
Dave
Comment Written 19-May-2013
reply by the author on 19-May-2013
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Hi Dave...
OMG...YE GADS...THAT 'STRANGE' WORD.. IS A EMBARASSING TYPO
SHOULD BE 'SURRENDER'.... What can I say...even the words
were getting 'hot'...LOL... singing the keyboard for sure..LO!
Thanks for the appreciative and enthusiastic review, and
all your intriguting thoughts and xomments, always a real
treat! First try in condensing a passion poem, and while
challenging, thought perhaps it was too brief or too
'reserved' as am sometimes told. Takes time to hone down
the skill with brevity yet impact in a romantic/passion poem.
So will work on it more. I appreciate you pardoning the
incredulous typo on such a key word as 'surrender'...am
still blushing over that one. That you accorded it an extra
star...I am truly overwhelmed...Thank you!
Gratitude and best wishes always.....Ronni
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Yeah ... I think I appreciated how the key strokes respond when so much passion/action is occurring. I am surprised you spelled anything correctly :)
