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Her World

My Beautiful Daughter

15 total reviews 
Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid
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Aloha GWGARGIS,
What a great poem about your pearl of a daughter, she sounds like a real gem. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and love.
Aloha Ginger
Hawaiian Mermaid
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 Comment Written 19-May-2013


reply by the author on 21-May-2013
    Nice review. I love the picture. Thanks, again.
Comment from Titanx9
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What a lovely poem! Little girls, even fifteen-year old ones, are very dear and precious. At that age, many are like a little fawn, coming into their own, and it's fun, and scary, to watch. I enjoyed your poem and this beautiful poem to your daughter!

 Comment Written 18-May-2013


reply by the author on 18-May-2013
    Thank you so much for the wonderful review and rating.
Comment from G.B. Smith
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Hello there GW
I have six granddaughters that I feel the same way for. This is a lovely tribute and I feel your love for her. She is a lucky girl to be so loved
Bear

 Comment Written 18-May-2013


reply by the author on 18-May-2013
    We just finished our girls' night and I wouldn't trade this time for anything. I am truly lucky with two beautiful girls and two wonderful boys. I guess my cup runneth over. Thank you for the wonderful and understanding review.
Comment from adewpearl
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I love the opening image
it's pearl - drop the apostrophe
lovely descriptive detail of your pretty daughter
I love the pearl is waiting/tide is rising line :-)
Isn't it grand to love a child? :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 18-May-2013


reply by the author on 18-May-2013
    Thanks for the great review and the helpful grammar tips.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Yes this is well written my friend you brought your thoughts to life with so much feeling my friend very beautiful why don't you stop by and read some of my work my friend regards Jill

 Comment Written 18-May-2013


reply by the author on 18-May-2013
    Thank you for the wonderful and encouraging review. I will read some of our work.
Comment from BeasPeas
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This is absolutely delightful. Tears to my eyes. With your permission I will forward it to my daughter. I couldn't have said it better.

 Comment Written 18-May-2013


reply by the author on 18-May-2013
    Thank you again for the wonderful and emotional review.
Comment from Curtis Hatch
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Gretchen,

This is a beautiful ode to your daughter. The words convey your passion and love for her. It is an outstanding poem that I enjoyed reading.

Curtis

 Comment Written 18-May-2013


reply by the author on 18-May-2013
    Thank you for the great review.
Comment from lorijean
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Such beautiful and loving poem to a child, so full of sentiment and grace, she is just starting her life and has the world at her feet. thank you for sharing..

 Comment Written 18-May-2013


reply by the author on 18-May-2013
    Thank you for the great review.
Comment from Misrael
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Very beautiful poem and very good description of the person and what she was like. Yes teenagers can have their good times but it seems that more often than not they are crabby. Good read and keep on writing.

 Comment Written 18-May-2013


reply by the author on 18-May-2013
    Thank you for the great review.
Comment from country ranch writer
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a childs smile is a beautiful thing it makes our hearts sing .no matter how old they get they know how to pull our heart strings. In their teen years they do think the world is there oyster so to speak. the angels watch over her and smile she is no different than your or I they say.

 Comment Written 18-May-2013


reply by the author on 18-May-2013
    Thank you for the great review.
reply by country ranch writer on 18-May-2013
    WELCOME