From out of the Grayness
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Vallange"Reaching from the gray areas to understand life
7 total reviews
Comment from tbacha58
Dear Vance, your soul and spirit are in that poem from the beginning till the end. Every words coming out of your pen meant much more than what you wrote. You wrote a past history in those few words, they spelled out how you feel, God Bless you, and I enjoyed reading your poem, some sadness. But you will be ok. I gave you a nice star to brighten your night. Hugs Terry
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2013
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Dear Vance, your soul and spirit are in that poem from the beginning till the end. Every words coming out of your pen meant much more than what you wrote. You wrote a past history in those few words, they spelled out how you feel, God Bless you, and I enjoyed reading your poem, some sadness. But you will be ok. I gave you a nice star to brighten your night. Hugs Terry
Comment Written 02-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2013
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Thanks so much Terry...you made my day!!Blessings and love Vance
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Vance
Your word selection is excellent and expressive.
Now I have no reason to have tangled thoughts when I read this part
Create, Create, Think and be strong, smile and be grateful and your life shall be long!
reply by the author on 19-May-2013
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Hello Vance
Your word selection is excellent and expressive.
Now I have no reason to have tangled thoughts when I read this part
Create, Create, Think and be strong, smile and be grateful and your life shall be long!
Comment Written 19-May-2013
reply by the author on 19-May-2013
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Dear Gert; thanks so much for your kind words and I'm so glad that I left something meaningful with you ! Blessings!! and So delighted for the six stars! Vance
Comment from bgcnorth
Wow! Get out of my head! So many times it is like this
in my poor little brain. All a mass of tangles thoughts, emotions and expressions just waiting to get out. Reading this in the style which it was written; so much crunched together is brilliant. Way to go1
reply by the author on 14-May-2013
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Wow! Get out of my head! So many times it is like this
in my poor little brain. All a mass of tangles thoughts, emotions and expressions just waiting to get out. Reading this in the style which it was written; so much crunched together is brilliant. Way to go1
Comment Written 13-May-2013
reply by the author on 14-May-2013
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bgnorth: thanks so much for your honored review and I am truly delighted that you captured it perfectly as intended as we all must come to the understanding (especially here on FS) WE ARE ALL CREATORS...When we are not creating...were in atrophy! Bad place! Bless you for you brilliant review and lovely six stars! EVERY GOOD WITH....Vance
Comment from mystery poet
I am certain Val is thrilled by this commemoration of
his reviewing, though no matter whom it is for, the deep
and meaningful truths are wonderfully summed up and
I found it a pleasure to read.
reply by the author on 13-May-2013
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I am certain Val is thrilled by this commemoration of
his reviewing, though no matter whom it is for, the deep
and meaningful truths are wonderfully summed up and
I found it a pleasure to read.
Comment Written 13-May-2013
reply by the author on 13-May-2013
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Wow! Thank you so much for this high honor and wonderful review! It was for Val and I'm sure he enjoyed it as he is certainly a poetic review MASTER. Thanks again! EVERY GOOD WISH! Vance
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Thank you and I did drop over to visit
his profile and found some talented
writers I have not run into yet. I am
especially glad that I read this and thanks
again for sharing him with us...
Comment from cephira
This write was overflowing with clever, insightful gems...some sparkling jewels hidden in the tresure chest of your soul, Mr. Gray! Line afted line was saturated with life lessons & soul glimpses. Just...wow. "While love in our pockets slips fast..." Magic...that's all I can say.
Cephira
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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This write was overflowing with clever, insightful gems...some sparkling jewels hidden in the tresure chest of your soul, Mr. Gray! Line afted line was saturated with life lessons & soul glimpses. Just...wow. "While love in our pockets slips fast..." Magic...that's all I can say.
Cephira
Comment Written 11-May-2013
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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Cephira: you have made my day and I'm so delighted that you found the intended depth and message meant for Val as he is a master reviewer and a challenge to impress. I was trying to get him into my groove and hope it worked. Blessings to you! Vance
Comment from Glasstruth
In some ways this sounds depressing at first when you mention all the pitfalls like "Cram dirty fingers in our soul's sanitary glove. Spit word of faux wisdom in the face of reality hoping applause from deep in some alley." Awesome writing. But at the end you mention: "we have the power to change and we'll be shown how. Create, Create, Think and be strong, smile and be grateful and your life shall be long!" Great finish! Les
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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In some ways this sounds depressing at first when you mention all the pitfalls like "Cram dirty fingers in our soul's sanitary glove. Spit word of faux wisdom in the face of reality hoping applause from deep in some alley." Awesome writing. But at the end you mention: "we have the power to change and we'll be shown how. Create, Create, Think and be strong, smile and be grateful and your life shall be long!" Great finish! Les
Comment Written 11-May-2013
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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Hey Les...you are up late my friend and thanks for your splendid review of this reply to Val Fitche who hung shiny bright tinsel upon the showcase of my last writing; Lyrics of Life so I had to assemble all of the non-uniform super=expletives I could imagine and create to try and drive him further into believing I had a real and tangible mission of thought here. Hmmm...still working on it. but having fun! Thanks for your contributions here!
EVERY GOOD WISH...Vance
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I'm a late nightbird. I read reviews while in flight. :) Les
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I'm a late nightbird. I read reviews while in flight. :) Les
Comment from val fitchie
......shhhhhhh........(we gotta stop meeting like this......)heehee................actually,I'm like a dead drunk on his birthday-I'm floored with the praise and intoxicated from the celebration.I'm lying in a pool of shared artistic blood and my soul refuses to leave the body (of work)the master executioner has left behind.Thank you(and Thank YOU for killing me with kindness)These will NOT be my last words...and the same goes for you
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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......shhhhhhh........(we gotta stop meeting like this......)heehee................actually,I'm like a dead drunk on his birthday-I'm floored with the praise and intoxicated from the celebration.I'm lying in a pool of shared artistic blood and my soul refuses to leave the body (of work)the master executioner has left behind.Thank you(and Thank YOU for killing me with kindness)These will NOT be my last words...and the same goes for you
Comment Written 11-May-2013
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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Well your review of the original work was so immaculate, nuclear, exaspeeraghanealigablely congenialitically perfecto and fanstory non-compliant, I simply had to try and configurate a more intercontinental anti-plageristic, expressitory, epexegesis on the conbobulatory directives of the allied derivitives of your subdural considerations, adnauseum! Amen!
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Val: I found it and do now remember reading this so I'm really confused as how that happened. I think it may be that I sometimes read a string of reviews and then forget to hit the send button as they are all scrolled up out of sight or I just get interrupted and the computer times out. So I take full blame for this one and Tom is off the hook. Great review to the review by the way!! Many thanks
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wohoho-ALL the THANKS go YOUSA!!!!(btw name off 2-3 country songs You would want to hear in a bar (my songlist had to be slightly rewritten and i have a few slots to fill)
