Comment from JM daSilva

Excellent

That can be an advantage or disadvantage. Guys do like to have girls walk in front of them so they can appreciate the buttscape. But I guess then, a woman in a wheelchair becomes very special because just one guy can appreciate the buttsphere.

 Comment Written 10-May-2013

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reply by the author on 10-May-2013

Very true. Men want to look. Women prefer to hide theirs. Thank tou~Debbie

reply by JM daSilva on 10-May-2013

Yeah. lol.

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

These small little poems of yours are funny my friend are you going to put them all in a book eventually I hope so thank you for sharing well done

 Comment Written 10-May-2013

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reply by the author on 10-May-2013

Thank you so very much. I am hoping to make a chapbook of these senryu, soon~Debbie

Comment from Jumbo J

Excellent

Hi Debbie,
I can see these as car-bumper stickers plastered on every bumper making for good smile when caught in traffic...although I don't know how you could keep this chair spinning... I'm steering clear of any comments as I don't want to become the butt of anyone's jokes...yeah, I know it was sick...sorry for that butt... Ah i mean i didn't want to touch on anything they may offend...slap me now!
Kindest thoughts,
James xx

 Comment Written 09-May-2013

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reply by the author on 10-May-2013

I would never slap you, my good friend. Loved the humor in this review. Most enjoyable. Thank you~Debbie xx

Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart

Excellent

Oh girl, now I would have never thought of that one, too funny but true. You are doing an awesome job with these little pieces, my brain isn't that fine tuned. God loves you and I do too.

 Comment Written 09-May-2013

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reply by the author on 09-May-2013

Thanks so much, Evelyn. Have a blessed day~Debbie

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I am laughing out loud. AMEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it. Your poem is perfect!!!!!! You did a great job with this one. I will have to share with out teacher in a wheelchair. I am sure she would get a kick out of it.

 Comment Written 09-May-2013

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reply by the author on 09-May-2013

I am having fun writing these. I hope she enjoys it and am glad you did~Debbie

Comment from Robert Lee Brown

Exceptional

This is classic. Reminds me of Confucius sayings, like: "Man who lay girl on hillside, not on level." Or, "Lady who fly in airplane upside down, have crack up." The humor is in the sudden twist at the end, like you did. I am happy to see you writing this kind of verse. I want a copy of the whole collection. Your friend, Bob

 Comment Written 09-May-2013

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reply by the author on 09-May-2013

I am trying to put together a collection and will make a note to send it to you. Thank you for the kind review and the stars. I am so glad you are enjoying these, Bob. I am having a great time writing them and have some more writtenbut not yet posted. Thake care my friend~Debbie

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Hello my friend I like the way you express your thoughts in this series of senryus some people would be moping around asking themselves why me not you my friend I admire you you are a strong lady regards Jill

 Comment Written 09-May-2013

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reply by the author on 09-May-2013

Thanks so very much, Jill. Take care, my friend~Debbie

Comment from Melspoems

Excellent

Lol Debbie!! This made me smile big time .. Way to find the positive :)

I know nothing really about senyrus but I wondered if the "her" should be moved to the final line

Never reveals
Her shapely butt

 Comment Written 09-May-2013

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reply by the author on 09-May-2013

I tried it both ways, and decided on this. It would work the other way too. Thank you~Debbie

Comment from barkingdog

Excellent

LOL Now, I would never have thought of that. How funny, Debbie, and you're spinning again. You have the making for one of those little books that they sell at the bookstore check out area. You could put a wheelchair poem on one page and a picture on the other.

 Comment Written 09-May-2013

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reply by the author on 09-May-2013

Yes, I may do a chapbook of this series. I have many more and am having a great time with them!!! Thank you~Debbie

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Hi Debbie, That moving wheelchair always makes me dizzy!
Great work in this one too. Loved your line three:)
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen


"woman in wheelchair
never reveals her
shapely butt"

 Comment Written 09-May-2013

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reply by the author on 09-May-2013

Thanks so much, my fried. Take care~Debbie