History and Myth
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Forest Fantasy"Poems that tell stories of long ago
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Comment from 9999pool
definitely a muse of a fantasy garden of sorts. It could have derived from a dream which we have long forgotten upon waking up ages ago. perhaps, we are all still in that dream where the forest comes alive and make a fantasy world for all of us to live in.
This sonnet write is different it does have a favored taste and soon we will hear the 'laughter from the knell too, perhaps?" LOL.
Great imaginative take a creative mind and for Tom, this is no barrier at all. Wish I was in this fantasy forest to find my muse, smiles.
Cheerio and a very good fantasy write - unusual and appealing too.
Ritchie.
P.S. My last sixers and still I wanted to taste for more - if not, I will definitely head for the laughter in the knell, smiles!
reply by the author on 12-May-2013
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definitely a muse of a fantasy garden of sorts. It could have derived from a dream which we have long forgotten upon waking up ages ago. perhaps, we are all still in that dream where the forest comes alive and make a fantasy world for all of us to live in.
This sonnet write is different it does have a favored taste and soon we will hear the 'laughter from the knell too, perhaps?" LOL.
Great imaginative take a creative mind and for Tom, this is no barrier at all. Wish I was in this fantasy forest to find my muse, smiles.
Cheerio and a very good fantasy write - unusual and appealing too.
Ritchie.
P.S. My last sixers and still I wanted to taste for more - if not, I will definitely head for the laughter in the knell, smiles!
Comment Written 12-May-2013
reply by the author on 12-May-2013
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Thanks you so much Ritchie. If you go there, try the candy canes! ;-))
Comment from Clipper962
You said your not sure where this came from it just popped out of you.
That's how I write. I'm sure it happens a lot for you. And that's why you
Write . This is a excellent poem!
reply by the author on 12-May-2013
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You said your not sure where this came from it just popped out of you.
That's how I write. I'm sure it happens a lot for you. And that's why you
Write . This is a excellent poem!
Comment Written 12-May-2013
reply by the author on 12-May-2013
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Thank you Clipper. You are so right. Sometimes the pen just leads me along.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
A delightfully clever poem.
Good use of description and imagery.
The poetry flows well and the interest
is sustained to the end.
Very effective presentation and a great pic
reply by the author on 12-May-2013
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A delightfully clever poem.
Good use of description and imagery.
The poetry flows well and the interest
is sustained to the end.
Very effective presentation and a great pic
Comment Written 12-May-2013
reply by the author on 12-May-2013
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Thank you for the very nice review and evaluation.
Comment from dmt1967
Every word I read my heart pumped faster lol very good horror poem and the picture helped with that theme no end thank you for sharing well done
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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Every word I read my heart pumped faster lol very good horror poem and the picture helped with that theme no end thank you for sharing well done
Comment Written 11-May-2013
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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Thank you dmt. So glad you liked it.
Comment from mrsmajor
I enjoyed reading your poem, although there was a tiny chill that came upon these old bones..but then the poem lived up to its name.."A little Fantasy..I loved the words you used to make this into a very pleasant read..I'll have to say this was a wonderful example of a Sonnet without rhyme..
Thanks for sharing, it was a pleasure.
Warmly,
Victoria
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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I enjoyed reading your poem, although there was a tiny chill that came upon these old bones..but then the poem lived up to its name.."A little Fantasy..I loved the words you used to make this into a very pleasant read..I'll have to say this was a wonderful example of a Sonnet without rhyme..
Thanks for sharing, it was a pleasure.
Warmly,
Victoria
Comment Written 09-May-2013
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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Thanks again Victoria. I am pleased that you so enjoy my work.
Tom.
This was again a pleasure, you are most welcome!
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Hi Treischel,
When your artwork loaded it scared me!
Great sonnet and fantasy work. I loved it, especially the ending.
Wasn't expecting that but it works well with your theme. As always well penned and a delight to read. You make sonnets look easy. Wonderful imagery throughout.
Did you hear about the fairy remains found??? I'll PM you the link - it was a fascinating discovery.
Thanks for sharing my friend.
Maureen
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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Hi Treischel,
When your artwork loaded it scared me!
Great sonnet and fantasy work. I loved it, especially the ending.
Wasn't expecting that but it works well with your theme. As always well penned and a delight to read. You make sonnets look easy. Wonderful imagery throughout.
Did you hear about the fairy remains found??? I'll PM you the link - it was a fascinating discovery.
Thanks for sharing my friend.
Maureen
Comment Written 08-May-2013
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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Thank you Maureen. As usual an excellent review. Yes, please send link.
Tom.
Comment from Dean Kuch
What a mystical, magical frolicking tale you've told here. I wish things this wonderfully written would just "pop out of me." More often than not, that's far from the case.
I could see the little pixie behind the knell laughing as the protagonist fell. I could smell the pines and the tangy mint of the candy cane. This was such a refreshing read.
Bravo!
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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What a mystical, magical frolicking tale you've told here. I wish things this wonderfully written would just "pop out of me." More often than not, that's far from the case.
I could see the little pixie behind the knell laughing as the protagonist fell. I could smell the pines and the tangy mint of the candy cane. This was such a refreshing read.
Bravo!
Comment Written 08-May-2013
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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Thank you so much Dean for this wonderful review and rating..
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Oh dear, how awful. Was it poison or was it a rancid candy cane leftover from a Christmas tree? =} This is well done, the art work is great. I don't really, well truthfully I know nothing about this type of poetry. My are all wonky and I'm just happy if they rhyme. This is way beyond me, but I like it and think it's very good. Rox
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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Oh dear, how awful. Was it poison or was it a rancid candy cane leftover from a Christmas tree? =} This is well done, the art work is great. I don't really, well truthfully I know nothing about this type of poetry. My are all wonky and I'm just happy if they rhyme. This is way beyond me, but I like it and think it's very good. Rox
Comment Written 08-May-2013
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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Thank you Roxanna. The important thing is you like it.
Comment from NicciFaye
The wonder of what is, the poetic storytelling. The picture and creative imagination of spookyness, thrill, and excitement. Excellent work.
reply by the author on 08-May-2013
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The wonder of what is, the poetic storytelling. The picture and creative imagination of spookyness, thrill, and excitement. Excellent work.
Comment Written 07-May-2013
reply by the author on 08-May-2013
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Thank you Nicci. Had some fun writing it.
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
Ok a fantasy for sure it be wish you could explain a little more to me ... the candy cane that you licked did you enjoy or did you get sick lol hey that wwas the best I could come up with MR T lol
TK
reply by the author on 08-May-2013
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Ok a fantasy for sure it be wish you could explain a little more to me ... the candy cane that you licked did you enjoy or did you get sick lol hey that wwas the best I could come up with MR T lol
TK
Comment Written 07-May-2013
reply by the author on 08-May-2013
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Thanks Tarnished. That is the mystery.
