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Comment from mrsmajor
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I really can identify with this one, I have been on this site since October 2004, and I have come to understand unless you are willing to spend a great deal on each posting there is a possibility that your work will never been seen...but fear not as the rankings mean very little, I have read some wonderful poem, that never see the light of day..I have decided, I enjoy the craft have acquired through the years some wonderful reviewers that keep me on the straight and narrow...The site is a business, and as I am also, I understand the bottom line is money..
Don't get discouraged, write for your own enjoyment things can always change...Thanks for sharing.
Warmly,
Victoria

 Comment Written 09-May-2013


reply by the author on 09-May-2013
    Thank you Victoria. I do agree that the reviewer here are like a family. That is enough to keep boing.
reply by mrsmajor on 09-May-2013

    You are most welcome, so as part of the family, I wish you well, feel better tomorrow, it will be a better day!
Comment from robina1978
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I just met two poems by you and they both did not pay more than two cents. Could that be the reason perhaps? Or maybe you need to collect more fans? Please do continue writing.

 Comment Written 07-May-2013


reply by the author on 07-May-2013
    Thanks Ine. Good suggestions. I try to put certificates on as soon as I can, but I on a pension, and at 20 to 32, cents, often 2 cents, it takes all day to earn one. If I write two poems, I get one behind every day, so I try, but it's hard. But I'll keep trying.
reply by robina1978 on 07-May-2013
    I review also sometimes the more expensive ones on the top of the first page.
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
    Thanks Ine, yes I do that too! It helps. To see where I'm coming from, read the note I just posted on my profile. Undeniably, this site takes a lot of energy, or money. Certificates are $9.93 or $6.63. Writing prompt/ contests cost $5. pumps cost $2,95. I've figured that it costs at least $100 to get on that first page. I wish I could afford, and yes I do enter all the free contests.
reply by robina1978 on 07-May-2013
    I can't either:)
Comment from Sararb
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My sentiments exactly! I loved how you made a poem of this, We, as poets and writers put a lot of time and effort in our work, and it is always good to get encouragement from fellow poets, and writers. Sararb :)

 Comment Written 06-May-2013


reply by the author on 06-May-2013
    Thank you Sara. I'm glad you understand.
Comment from twinklepoems
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Ok, I already gave you my two cents about the downer point of view. This is a good a rant as most (I would have given4 stars 'cause it is really just good not above average) but I didn't want to add to your frustration. Your 29 on the Fanstory boards so it can't be that NO ONE is reading your work...you don't get to 29 that way. People seem to like short pithy humor poetry. Maybe do a humor competition but promote it even if you aren't the winner that seems to pick up some following. I guess the bottom line is that ultimately we write for our own souls even though we crave recognition! Twinks

 Comment Written 06-May-2013


reply by the author on 06-May-2013
    Ok Twinks. Don't give up on me yet.
Comment from NicciFaye
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FUNNY....the opening of this poem is PRICELESS...as I watch my certificates die...oh my God, I know the feeling. All I can say Treischel is KEEP ON WRITING THE GOOD FIGHT. Your not writing for yourself you are writing for someone else....to encourage and inspire. Many blessings.

 Comment Written 06-May-2013


reply by the author on 06-May-2013
    OK Nicci, i'm convinced. Thanks.
Comment from Indie Skreet
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I love to read every bit cos Tom does not write any shit, so keep it going with the wit, and stop being a bleedin' tit lol. your fan, Indie xx

 Comment Written 06-May-2013


reply by the author on 06-May-2013
    Thanks Indie. That got me to smile.
Comment from Gungalo
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Tom you have to make mare fans. That's all there is to it. You don't get the reviews without the fans. Sigh my friend, I hate to see you go to waste over this.

 Comment Written 06-May-2013


reply by the author on 06-May-2013
    Geez, I can't keep up with my emails as it is.
reply by Gungalo on 06-May-2013
    Oh well guy.
Comment from dmt1967
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Yes my friend I think a lot of people have left this year which is a shame but it was there time I guess great poem thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 06-May-2013


reply by the author on 06-May-2013
    Thanks dmt. Seems like their either leaving or dying.
Comment from Robin Gilmor
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That one is a grabber Tom. Love the look. But who took the picture? Karen? Come on honey, back in the bathroom, I need some more pictures!!!!
Great picture great verse. I'm not getting the views I use to. But I care less than you. A couple good reviews is all I require and most tell me what I already know. Hang in there Tom. Your a great poet and you and I know it.
Smiles. Robin :



 Comment Written 06-May-2013


reply by the author on 06-May-2013
    Thanks Robin. I took that picture myself on my IPad. Ok. At least I have one cheerleader.
reply by Robin Gilmor on 06-May-2013
    Oh, 'tis to laugh and have a happy day. :)