My Noble Prize
Kyrielle Sonnet - Proposal from Pierre to Marie Curie16 total reviews
Comment from Indie Skreet
a most original sonnet for the contest, well written. Good luck ........................... I have seen a few and there are some great ones, but so is this, best Indie
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a most original sonnet for the contest, well written. Good luck ........................... I have seen a few and there are some great ones, but so is this, best Indie
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Thanks, Indie. I've seen a few great ones, too, but I couldn't resist. lol I appreciate the kind comments and review.
Comment from Laurent Andre Menot
With a few words, well chosen, you paint a beautiful poem,
with a spiritual atmosphere.
This is a very creative and original piece of poetry well written.
Thanks for sharing!
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With a few words, well chosen, you paint a beautiful poem,
with a spiritual atmosphere.
This is a very creative and original piece of poetry well written.
Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Thank you for a lovely review, Laurent. :)
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You are welcome :)
Comment from hifein
kind of surprised to see a love poem about the relationship of marie and pierre curie. don't usually think of science and love in the same breath. you were successful in creating this interesting poem, well written with some very good lines 'minds entwined in cerebral dance', like the refrain, 'chemistry proves destiny'. nice graphic to round it out.
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kind of surprised to see a love poem about the relationship of marie and pierre curie. don't usually think of science and love in the same breath. you were successful in creating this interesting poem, well written with some very good lines 'minds entwined in cerebral dance', like the refrain, 'chemistry proves destiny'. nice graphic to round it out.
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Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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I was surprised to find them in a top 20 list of the greatest lovers of all time. It made me curious, so I had to try. Thank you for a most excellent review.
Comment from MM lives on :)
an excellent poem here, I see philosophy, science, cosmic and psychology, just what i like to see in poetry, Thus and queens for a regal finish!
BRAVO, A 6 STAR DELIGHT!
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an excellent poem here, I see philosophy, science, cosmic and psychology, just what i like to see in poetry, Thus and queens for a regal finish!
BRAVO, A 6 STAR DELIGHT!
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Wow! Thank you for this most exceptional six star review, Christopher. I am truly honored.
Kim
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it reminds me of mine in a way, LOL, I write based on History and Psychology and science..and innate things.
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Perhaps I should have a look at your portfolio :)
Comment from Cristina DS
Very interesting sonnet. I love the soft rhyming, the flow and cadence of the sonnet. Not only minds are entwined, but so are the verses, all with great rhythm. Very nice indeed! Thanks for sharing!
Cristina
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Very interesting sonnet. I love the soft rhyming, the flow and cadence of the sonnet. Not only minds are entwined, but so are the verses, all with great rhythm. Very nice indeed! Thanks for sharing!
Cristina
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Comment Written 05-May-2013
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Thank you for a lovely review Cristina. :)
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my pleasure!!!
Comment from Galactia
If that doesn't have class, I don't know what does.
This is a great Kyrielle Sonnet, unique subject i thought to go on. each line is in perfect Iambic tetrameter.
perfect rhyme scheme of: AabB, ccbB, ddbB
favourite stanza is...
I see a noble in your eyes,
Become my queen, my crowning prize,
Where laws of physics govern thee,
Thus, chemistry proves destiny.
Excellent job and wish you well in the contest.
Regards
Tia
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If that doesn't have class, I don't know what does.
This is a great Kyrielle Sonnet, unique subject i thought to go on. each line is in perfect Iambic tetrameter.
perfect rhyme scheme of: AabB, ccbB, ddbB
favourite stanza is...
I see a noble in your eyes,
Become my queen, my crowning prize,
Where laws of physics govern thee,
Thus, chemistry proves destiny.
Excellent job and wish you well in the contest.
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Thank you so much, Tia, for this exceptional review. I was daring to be different lol :) I'm so happy that appealed to you.
Kim
