All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 80 "New Day"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from dmt1967
This is another good poem I like the old person then she puts on her face and becomes young again very well written good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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This is another good poem I like the old person then she puts on her face and becomes young again very well written good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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and thank you so much for reading & reviewing - such a tired old prompt, but I realized I'd never entered it. So ... why not?
Comment from persevere
I like your interpretation of "behind the door", the door of a new day. You then give a delightful description of the transformation of an ageing face into a "lipstick'd, mascara'd" appearance. Well done and good luck for the contest.
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I like your interpretation of "behind the door", the door of a new day. You then give a delightful description of the transformation of an ageing face into a "lipstick'd, mascara'd" appearance. Well done and good luck for the contest.
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Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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thx so much p.!
Comment from Tina McKala
I believe I know who this is lol ;)
very well written, original take on the door; mirror-cabinet door almost like the door to one's soul. Your style is great and the poem is so profound.
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I believe I know who this is lol ;)
very well written, original take on the door; mirror-cabinet door almost like the door to one's soul. Your style is great and the poem is so profound.
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Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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aah surprise surprise ... thx so much Tina!
