We will survive!
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "To Stroll on Starry Night"A book of encouragement.
15 total reviews
Comment from DRG24
Dear Dovey~
I really enjoyed your poem and I wanted to give you a surprise that it will be recognized! Great job with it and a good contribution!
reply by the author on 31-May-2013
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Dear Dovey~
I really enjoyed your poem and I wanted to give you a surprise that it will be recognized! Great job with it and a good contribution!
Comment Written 30-May-2013
reply by the author on 31-May-2013
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Thank you for a wonderful review. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my poem. :)
Kim
Comment from Kiki12
You know what I find more difficult than english sonnet? Ottava Rima! Wow- I'm so impressed, and no, I will not attempt another of these! LOL What a beautiful poem this is, I love the rhyme and your meter sounds perfect to me :)
this is my favorite phrase, it's just lovely:
Assured, your soul reflects the silver moon,
Beautifully done all around-
Kiki
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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You know what I find more difficult than english sonnet? Ottava Rima! Wow- I'm so impressed, and no, I will not attempt another of these! LOL What a beautiful poem this is, I love the rhyme and your meter sounds perfect to me :)
this is my favorite phrase, it's just lovely:
Assured, your soul reflects the silver moon,
Beautifully done all around-
Kiki
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review, Kiki. I was intrigued with the style and just had to give it a try. :) I truly appreciate your kind comments and review.
Comment from Jean Lutz
Often I say the Creator communes with His children through His creation. I believe this writing could be used as evidence for my case.
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Often I say the Creator communes with His children through His creation. I believe this writing could be used as evidence for my case.
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Thank you for a wonderful review, Jean. :)
Comment from mermaids
As one with nature,you become in tune is a lovely line that makes the reader feel good. Your smooth flow of words and flow of verses make this poem full of encouragement.
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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As one with nature,you become in tune is a lovely line that makes the reader feel good. Your smooth flow of words and flow of verses make this poem full of encouragement.
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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I appreciate your kind comments and review, mermaids. :)
Comment from honeytree
The art work and words are really special
The giving of nature's gifts and receiving
These gifts are very special for us all.
Honey tree
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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The art work and words are really special
The giving of nature's gifts and receiving
These gifts are very special for us all.
Honey tree
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Thank you, Honeytree, for your kind comments and review.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a beautiful piece of artwork you have chosen for this poem of healing and encouragement. Lovely line -
your soul reflects the silver moon.
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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This is a beautiful piece of artwork you have chosen for this poem of healing and encouragement. Lovely line -
your soul reflects the silver moon.
Comment Written 04-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Thank you for a wonderful review, Pearl. :)
Comment from Indie Skreet
a beautifully written addition to this worthy book. Easy flowing rhythm and rhyme, as good poetry should be. Very much enjoyed this piece, Indie
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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a beautifully written addition to this worthy book. Easy flowing rhythm and rhyme, as good poetry should be. Very much enjoyed this piece, Indie
Comment Written 04-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Thank you for these wonderful comments, Indie. :)
Comment from adewpearl
Good abababcc rhyming
nice alliteration in stroll on starry
and in crisp and clear
and in heavy heartedness
lovely detail of setting that creates an upbeat tone in your message about the healing powers of nature :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 04-May-2013
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Good abababcc rhyming
nice alliteration in stroll on starry
and in crisp and clear
and in heavy heartedness
lovely detail of setting that creates an upbeat tone in your message about the healing powers of nature :-) Brooke
Comment Written 04-May-2013
reply by the author on 04-May-2013
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Thank you for this wonderful review, Brooke. Its always a pleasure.
Kim
Comment from sunnilicious
Well that is a wonderful poem. Well thought out and nicely written. Lovely gift to commemorate that little someone special. Great author notes. Excellent.
reply by the author on 04-May-2013
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Well that is a wonderful poem. Well thought out and nicely written. Lovely gift to commemorate that little someone special. Great author notes. Excellent.
Comment Written 04-May-2013
reply by the author on 04-May-2013
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Thank you for a lovely review, Sunni.
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Dovey, I love your choice of artwork to not only enhance your poem, but also, it brings to life this great message. Very well said and very well done,,,,,,Jim
reply by the author on 04-May-2013
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Dovey, I love your choice of artwork to not only enhance your poem, but also, it brings to life this great message. Very well said and very well done,,,,,,Jim
Comment Written 04-May-2013
reply by the author on 04-May-2013
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Thank you for a wonderful review, Jim.
Kim
