All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 45 "Wildest Rainbows"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from gene roush
Nicely done with an extremely limiting format.
It has a wonderful message.
I've never imagined the sky to be "peach chiffon". it's a very nice image.
Thanks for sharing
Gene
reply by the author on 08-May-2013
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Nicely done with an extremely limiting format.
It has a wonderful message.
I've never imagined the sky to be "peach chiffon". it's a very nice image.
Thanks for sharing
Gene
Comment Written 07-May-2013
reply by the author on 08-May-2013
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Thank you so much gene! :)Sharyn
Comment from poetbear
This made so much sense.
Changes have to be part lie but we need to know how to make them work again.
Lve has many layers and the taste changes sometimes but it is always love.
reply by the author on 08-May-2013
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This made so much sense.
Changes have to be part lie but we need to know how to make them work again.
Lve has many layers and the taste changes sometimes but it is always love.
Comment Written 07-May-2013
reply by the author on 08-May-2013
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bless you pb! :)Sharyn
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Oh, my girl, this is a six for the flow. the rhyming, and the descriptions. I have not read one like this in a long time. I am there and feeling the description, the pull of the rhymes as they flow so easy. Great one
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Oh, my girl, this is a six for the flow. the rhyming, and the descriptions. I have not read one like this in a long time. I am there and feeling the description, the pull of the rhymes as they flow so easy. Great one
Comment Written 07-May-2013
reply by the author on 08-May-2013
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What a sweetheart! Barb, thank you so much for your lovely sixon this one my dear - so much appreciated!
Blessings,
Sharyn
Comment from 4tun81
Thank you for this insightful poem. I firmly believe that for any relationship to survive that both parties need to adapt to the changes that each individual undergoes. Clearly I am not the same person I was when I got married. Nor is my wife. Our commitment, our vow was to constantly look for and find our hears again and again.
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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Thank you for this insightful poem. I firmly believe that for any relationship to survive that both parties need to adapt to the changes that each individual undergoes. Clearly I am not the same person I was when I got married. Nor is my wife. Our commitment, our vow was to constantly look for and find our hears again and again.
Comment Written 07-May-2013
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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thank you for your lovely reading of this one my dear! :)Sharyn
Comment from Titanx9
In addition to regaling your readers with this awesome sonnet, you are also providing a wealth of information in your author notes. It's such a delight reading your work, because one can almost feel your pulse in each line. This is so beautiful and the message of love aiming for restoration is heartwarming.
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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In addition to regaling your readers with this awesome sonnet, you are also providing a wealth of information in your author notes. It's such a delight reading your work, because one can almost feel your pulse in each line. This is so beautiful and the message of love aiming for restoration is heartwarming.
Comment Written 07-May-2013
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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You're such a sweetheart, Dossie - thank you so much for your lavish praise!
Big smiles! Off to catch some rainbows!
Sharyn
Comment from Patti R.
Ah, Sharyn, your sonnet is so lovely. Didn't hurt my eyes one bit! Yes, the run-on are fluid, beautifully stitched together - mountainwriter49 does this oh so well. I haven't conquered that style yet.
To write a sonnet reminds me of the importance of rhyme and meter - especially after writing much free verse. It's almost like going back to school, where discipline and rules abound. Like exercise for this poet's brain.
Your subject is sweet. At first you have me nodding and smiling in agreement with the questioning mood and words. But then your twist - hey, let's try to make it work! wasn't what I was expecting.
So excellent, no sixes to give to you. Wish I did.
Patti
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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Ah, Sharyn, your sonnet is so lovely. Didn't hurt my eyes one bit! Yes, the run-on are fluid, beautifully stitched together - mountainwriter49 does this oh so well. I haven't conquered that style yet.
To write a sonnet reminds me of the importance of rhyme and meter - especially after writing much free verse. It's almost like going back to school, where discipline and rules abound. Like exercise for this poet's brain.
Your subject is sweet. At first you have me nodding and smiling in agreement with the questioning mood and words. But then your twist - hey, let's try to make it work! wasn't what I was expecting.
So excellent, no sixes to give to you. Wish I did.
Patti
Comment Written 07-May-2013
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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Bless you Patti - glad you didn't need your sunnies for this one darlin'! :))S
Comment from mauial
Beautiful imagery with this sonnet. The rainbow days of new love for some can become lost but for others we can add more colors to it.
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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Beautiful imagery with this sonnet. The rainbow days of new love for some can become lost but for others we can add more colors to it.
Comment Written 07-May-2013
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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Bless you, Al - what a sweet thought! :)Sharyn
Comment from Norbanus
Delightful how you've made the sonnet sing
and told your story clearly with resolve
We see and feel this place where birds take wing
then watch the sad refrain as loves devolve
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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Delightful how you've made the sonnet sing
and told your story clearly with resolve
We see and feel this place where birds take wing
then watch the sad refrain as loves devolve
Comment Written 07-May-2013
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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I always love your reviews dear - frame-able in themselves!! :)Sharyn
Comment from Creative77
What a beautiful poem! Your thoughts are very descriptive and quite honest. I love the "rainbow" reference. Also, the picture is absolutely stunning. Great job!
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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What a beautiful poem! Your thoughts are very descriptive and quite honest. I love the "rainbow" reference. Also, the picture is absolutely stunning. Great job!
Comment Written 07-May-2013
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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Bless you C7 - thank you so much! :)Sharyn
Comment from Lulube
I need to print out the notes for a better referal. Love the first 2 verses with the descriptive visions for the reader to dance through. Then returning to your love after a lifetime already, is there more?
lulube
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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I need to print out the notes for a better referal. Love the first 2 verses with the descriptive visions for the reader to dance through. Then returning to your love after a lifetime already, is there more?
lulube
Comment Written 07-May-2013
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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Glad you enjoyed lu! You can google sonnet form any time - Shakespearean is the most straightforward and not that complicated - rather fun to try once you've got the iambic pentameter thing down. You should try one - I KNOW you'd be good at it as I can see you have a unique gift of observation.
:)sharyn
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try try I should thxs and welcome
lulube
