Comment from Robin Gilmor

Excellent

Good poem, says it all in proper form and so few words. But your picture is
worth a thousand. A very enjoyable read. Glad you have finally enjoyed a
pleasant day with your beautiful car. Do you allow your wife to drive it???????
Sunny smiles, Robin

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013

Thanks Robin. Yes I let her, but she doesn't like it because it's so hard to keep it under 50 in the city. It just takes off on her. Of course I like that.

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

The top down was difficult to see in this photo. But you made a very nice Whitney: it must be so nice to drive with an open roof and have the right weather.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013

Thanks Ine. It is a joy.

reply by robina1978 on 29-Apr-2013

welcome and I believe it will be., Ine

Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid

Excellent

Aloha Treischel,
This is a great poem about a good reason to take out that Pontiac out for a ride. You inspired this. Have a beautiful day.

A top down day
Sounds A O K
Hawaii's way
Most every day

Aloha Ginger
Hawaiian Mermaid

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013

Thanks Ginger. I know it's Hawaii's way every day. That's way we appreciate it so much when we finally have nice weather, Earlier in the week we had 4 inches of snow, five days Katerina it's 80 degrees.

Comment from twinklepoems

Good

Great car, looks fun to ride around in! I think you forgot a line. A whitney is 3/4/3/4/3/4/7 I think you are missing the last four syllable line. If you change it I will be happy to up the rating! Good rhyme scheme.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013

Omg. I did drop a line. Ih ad written it but missed typing it in,. Thanks for catching. Fixed it.

Comment from Sam Mendonca

Excellent

I know what you mean about getting the top down.
There's nothing like the wind blowing in your face.

Nice photo of your car. I've always wanted a corvette. :D

Very well written and enjoy your car with the top down. :D

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013

Thank you Sam I certainly will.

Comment from Indie Skreet

Excellent

since I reckon I suffer from a bit of SAD, I also appreciate the change in the weather. This weekend was glorious sunny here for the first time in quite a while. This is a great poem Tom. I love 'top down day' and the wind through the hair. Hope you had a lovely weekend, Indie

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013

Thanks Indie. Yes I really enjoyed it.