Lonly
a sad lonly soul3 total reviews
Comment from Sagnik Das
Oh,what a charming piece of pure delight! these soul-rending lines seem sufficient enough to speak for themselves- they ring out vociferously with eternal pangs of sorrow...leaves me stupefied, such a morbid sentiment- beautifully expressed and gracefully poised.Three cheers to you, my friend! and good luck for the contest, wherein I too happen to take part...
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Oh,what a charming piece of pure delight! these soul-rending lines seem sufficient enough to speak for themselves- they ring out vociferously with eternal pangs of sorrow...leaves me stupefied, such a morbid sentiment- beautifully expressed and gracefully poised.Three cheers to you, my friend! and good luck for the contest, wherein I too happen to take part...
Comment Written 27-Apr-2013
Comment from Sam Mendonca
A very emotional written poem with deep meaning. :D
A couple of suggestion. :D
I believe your first line has 6 syllables
MY (1) eyes(2) have(3) tears(4) fall(5) ing(6)
Lonly- Lonely
In side(Inside) I am dying.
Good luck in the contest. :D
I would be happy to give you a five stars after the editing. :)
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A very emotional written poem with deep meaning. :D
A couple of suggestion. :D
I believe your first line has 6 syllables
MY (1) eyes(2) have(3) tears(4) fall(5) ing(6)
Lonly- Lonely
In side(Inside) I am dying.
Good luck in the contest. :D
I would be happy to give you a five stars after the editing. :)
Comment Written 27-Apr-2013
Comment from vee91113
This is such a short poem to be so powerful. I could really feel myself in it. With all the emotions coming out it made me want to cry for him or her. Very well written.
-Vee
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This is such a short poem to be so powerful. I could really feel myself in it. With all the emotions coming out it made me want to cry for him or her. Very well written.
-Vee
Comment Written 27-Apr-2013
