Comment from Nottoway

Excellent

This made me think that I need to break out the clubs!! It has been a very long time. I know my swing will be rusty but I need to get back into it as well.

A very descriptive little poem that captures the plight of the golfer!!

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013

Thank you Nottoway.

Comment from Sararb

Excellent

Neat poem about golf. I can tell by your poem that you had a great day out in the sunshine on the driving range. Glad that you had an enjoyable day.... Sararb :)

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013

Thank you Sara. Yes I did. Hit a bucket of balls with my Grandson.

Comment from yonashalom

Excellent

Hah, cute. Rusty swings. Is that you? or a random photo. I know you take a lot of your own photos for your poems. Great job and choice of sport. My dad was a golfer. My son golfs too. Oh my gosh the stories of stray balls. LOL. ~Yona

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013

Thanks Yona. Not me, but I took the photograph.

reply by yonashalom on 28-Apr-2013

Nice shot. :)

Comment from Robin Gilmor

Excellent

I guess you didn't make the Masters? Me neither. Great write that hints greatly of the limitation of being over wintered. It comes back after a few tries. enjoyable. Dern snow doesn't know when it's time to go. Enjoyable as always.
miles. Robin :)

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013

Thanks Robin. No Masters, maybe next year.

Comment from barkingdog

Excellent

It's nice to get back outside after so much winter.

You have nice alliteration in your first line(weather warmed) that flows into the second line(went)

Great final line--rusty swings. LOL

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013

Thanks barking dog. Glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from Annie James

Excellent

Nicely done, good rhythm, I like the alliteration. Paints a clear picture of the appreciation of life, joyfully embracing the good weather despite the "rusty swings".

The long hot summer to look forward to . . .

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013

Thank you Annie. Had my grandson hitting a bucket with me.

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, treishel, you did an excellent job writing this 5 7 5 poem about the day at the driving range. i enjoyed reading this one. hope you won

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013

Thanks sweetwoodjax.

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

weather finally warmed
went out to the driving range
lots of rusty swings

It was about time too eh Tom? Great little write here in 5/7/5 format. You loved it, I know you did. Hehehe.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013

Thanks Gungalo. Yes I did. Hit a bucket of balls with my 8year old Grandson.

reply by Gungalo on 28-Apr-2013

Smile