senryu (advice for the young)
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Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made effective use of each syllable in this wryly humorous, TRUE senryu. If more youngsters were told this, perhaps they'd make better use of their time! This is really good!
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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2013
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You have made effective use of each syllable in this wryly humorous, TRUE senryu. If more youngsters were told this, perhaps they'd make better use of their time! This is really good!
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Comment Written 26-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2013
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Thank you Janice for your nice comments, I appreciate it. Have a great weekend my friend.
Comment from simplyteresa
So totally cute I couldn't keep from smiling when I read it! I wish you the best of luck in the contest this is such a fun poem.
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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2013
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So totally cute I couldn't keep from smiling when I read it! I wish you the best of luck in the contest this is such a fun poem.
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Comment Written 26-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2013
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Thank you Teresa, I'm glad it made you smile. Have a great weekend my friend.
