senryu (advice for the young)
Contest Entry32 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! This poem was funny, thought provoking and true! The author did a great job conveying the point.
The artwork was great and enhanced the read.
Thank you, harmony13
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Excellent Poem! This poem was funny, thought provoking and true! The author did a great job conveying the point.
The artwork was great and enhanced the read.
Thank you, harmony13
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Thank you Harmony for your great review, I appreciate your kind words. Have a nice day. Bill
Comment from Caressa_08
Your cleverness, one of a kind again, seen & rewarded with this, your poetry, that, though, can be true, unless there is some new pill or spring water to keep us going after 100, or maybe it's just your poetry, to keeps us all laughing; the best medicine around..to keep us on the up & up..
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Your cleverness, one of a kind again, seen & rewarded with this, your poetry, that, though, can be true, unless there is some new pill or spring water to keep us going after 100, or maybe it's just your poetry, to keeps us all laughing; the best medicine around..to keep us on the up & up..
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Thank you Caressa for your outstanding review. I've received hundreds of reviews over the years, but yours touched me more than any other. Thank you for your nice comments, I really appreciate that. Have a great day my friend. Bill
Comment from JeanneHP
Loved that one Bill. What a fun poem in so few words. It made me chuckle, cause it is so true, but somehow funny at the same time. :-)
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Loved that one Bill. What a fun poem in so few words. It made me chuckle, cause it is so true, but somehow funny at the same time. :-)
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Thanks Jeanne for your wonderful review, I'm glad it made you chuckle. That makes it all worthwhile my friend. Have a great day. Bill
Comment from 4tun81
This totally deserves the prize. Great job. I have found that many people change their definition of old age to make sure it is always just around the corner.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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This totally deserves the prize. Great job. I have found that many people change their definition of old age to make sure it is always just around the corner.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Thank you for your great review, I appreciate it very much. Also, welcome to this site. I hope you have a long enjoyable stay my friend. Bill
Comment from justatuna
I'm glad you won this contest. I'm surprised this isn't rated a 6. I'm sure there are experts who can tell me why, but experts seem to love their own thoughts. This was truly an intelligent write in one of my favorite smiles. I will remember this poem. Congratulations. Although I didn't read the other entries, you are deserving.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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I'm glad you won this contest. I'm surprised this isn't rated a 6. I'm sure there are experts who can tell me why, but experts seem to love their own thoughts. This was truly an intelligent write in one of my favorite smiles. I will remember this poem. Congratulations. Although I didn't read the other entries, you are deserving.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Thank you my friend for such a great review, I really appreciate your kind words and rating. But most of all, I'm glad it made you smile. That makes it all worthwhile. Take care and have a wonderful day. Bill
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I meant favorite 'styles'. Hate when I mess up such a perfectly worded review:) Words!
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Being the receiver of your great review, I much prefer the word "smiles" over "styles". Take care my friend. Bill
Comment from Doc Holiday
Congratulations on your contest win! I can clearly see why your senryu was chosen. You are so right with so few words and bit a humour as well!
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Congratulations on your contest win! I can clearly see why your senryu was chosen. You are so right with so few words and bit a humour as well!
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Thanks Doc for your nice comments, I appreciate it very much my friend. Have a good day. Bill
Comment from steevie
Good job on this contest win, my friend. You have spoken words of wisdom form an old voice. More should listen to what you've written.
steve
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Good job on this contest win, my friend. You have spoken words of wisdom form an old voice. More should listen to what you've written.
steve
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Thanks Steve for your great review, I appreciate your nice comments. Have a nice day my friend. Bill
You as well, Bill
steve
Comment from Laurie Clayton
Hold on... I've just choked on my coffee. A very worthy winner of the contest. Love the instant imagery on not so subtle humour.
Best wishes,
Laurie
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Hold on... I've just choked on my coffee. A very worthy winner of the contest. Love the instant imagery on not so subtle humour.
Best wishes,
Laurie
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Thanks Laurie, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Have a great Sunday. Bill
Comment from lorijean
Loved this it made me laugh, so few words can put across a strong and very true message, a fun read, keep 'em coming, thank for sharing....
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Loved this it made me laugh, so few words can put across a strong and very true message, a fun read, keep 'em coming, thank for sharing....
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Thank you Lorijean, I'm glad it made you laugh. Have a great day. Bill
Comment from emjaihammond
I'm just finding out what a senryu is, so I feel a little strange critiquing someone who clearly does. But I do know that I like this rather humorous work, and this one speaks the truth it can't be denied. You have a good entry and you have used very good judgment in pairing it with this picture. Good luck!
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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I'm just finding out what a senryu is, so I feel a little strange critiquing someone who clearly does. But I do know that I like this rather humorous work, and this one speaks the truth it can't be denied. You have a good entry and you have used very good judgment in pairing it with this picture. Good luck!
Comment Written 27-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Thank you my friend for your great review. It won the contest. Keep writing. Bill
