All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Glow"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from fairy77
This was beautiful as usual from you.I enjoyed the description and the display of your very neighbourhood.LOved purple orchids:)beth fairy77.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2013
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This was beautiful as usual from you.I enjoyed the description and the display of your very neighbourhood.LOved purple orchids:)beth fairy77.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2013
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thank you so much Beth! :)) I love them too!
Best wishes
Sharyn
Comment from rhymelord
Dear Sharyn,
What a delightful picture you draw in this exquisitely "non-poem" (just kidding). You, of course, are surrounded by such vivid displays all year. Must be great inspiration, which you take great advantage of.
Regards
Reg
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2013
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Dear Sharyn,
What a delightful picture you draw in this exquisitely "non-poem" (just kidding). You, of course, are surrounded by such vivid displays all year. Must be great inspiration, which you take great advantage of.
Regards
Reg
Comment Written 24-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2013
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Bless you, Reg - oh dear, this one's not for you at all ... best I can do is two long "oh" sounds in "old" and "glow", sorry! oh well ... I think you might have missed my previous one, about getting old (not that that's at all relevant to either of US of course) - but its rhyme scheme, if I may say so myself, was pretty damned good! :)))
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Sharyn, you are very lucky to see the beauty you have there everyday. We have beauty here in Ohio, but, nothing like yours. Your description of what you saw gave me in my mind the same view. Thanks for sharing this,,,,,,,Jim
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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Sharyn, you are very lucky to see the beauty you have there everyday. We have beauty here in Ohio, but, nothing like yours. Your description of what you saw gave me in my mind the same view. Thanks for sharing this,,,,,,,Jim
Comment Written 23-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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Happy to share Jim - always dear. :)S
Comment from jppoet
HELLO AGAIN, I JUST GAVE YOUR PUZZLED PIECES A SOUR REVIEW, AS AN OVERRIPE TOMATO. THIS SWEET AND POSITIVE VIGNETTE IS POETIC, ITS IMAGERY VIVID AND ITS STORYLINE PERFECTLY PACED AND ELABORATED. THIS ENCOURAGES ME TO LOOK FOR MORE. BRAVO. BLESSINGS
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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HELLO AGAIN, I JUST GAVE YOUR PUZZLED PIECES A SOUR REVIEW, AS AN OVERRIPE TOMATO. THIS SWEET AND POSITIVE VIGNETTE IS POETIC, ITS IMAGERY VIVID AND ITS STORYLINE PERFECTLY PACED AND ELABORATED. THIS ENCOURAGES ME TO LOOK FOR MORE. BRAVO. BLESSINGS
Comment Written 23-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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I believe you mean elaborate
Comment from robina1978
You described this little house so beautiful. The house was nothing special but the orchid curtains gave it its glow. Nice little poem.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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You described this little house so beautiful. The house was nothing special but the orchid curtains gave it its glow. Nice little poem.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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Thx so much Ine! :)S
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so welcome Sharyn, Ine
Comment from Spitfire
It's amazing how flowers can turn something unpretentious into a miracle. Landscaping makes a big difference. Putting out flowers show that the owners care. They love their home.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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It's amazing how flowers can turn something unpretentious into a miracle. Landscaping makes a big difference. Putting out flowers show that the owners care. They love their home.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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You're right there, spits! :)S
Comment from adewpearl
What a gorgeous visual you create
I love the idea that this old, unpretentious house is made to glow from the beauty of the luxuriant orchids surrounding it - making the ordinary extraordinary :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2013
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What a gorgeous visual you create
I love the idea that this old, unpretentious house is made to glow from the beauty of the luxuriant orchids surrounding it - making the ordinary extraordinary :-) Brooke
Comment Written 22-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2013
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thank you so much Brooke - sometimes simplicity is the most beautiful thing of all, yes?
:)Sharyn
Comment from Dawn Munro
...Sigh...oh I know just what you mean - I've seen similar sights. Somehow it's like the house takes on a personality, that warmth radiates from it, as if the people within are so happy...(when they really could be miserable and mean! LOL! But it's fun to imagine...)
What a lovely poem! Its ambiance is so evident, and so simply and elegantly presented in tow powerful words - orchids and glow.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2013
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...Sigh...oh I know just what you mean - I've seen similar sights. Somehow it's like the house takes on a personality, that warmth radiates from it, as if the people within are so happy...(when they really could be miserable and mean! LOL! But it's fun to imagine...)
What a lovely poem! Its ambiance is so evident, and so simply and elegantly presented in tow powerful words - orchids and glow.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2013
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thx so much Dawn - yep - "simple" day yesterday - relatively! :)S
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Ooops - make that 'two' words, the 'towed' ones are not so simple! LOL. Ah, some of the best days are the simple ones...:)
Comment from Selina Stambi
Oh, to live in a land where such a waterfall of orchids would not cost several hundreds of dollars!
A spectacular visual you've created .... a breathless, breathtaking one-word last line.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2013
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Oh, to live in a land where such a waterfall of orchids would not cost several hundreds of dollars!
A spectacular visual you've created .... a breathless, breathtaking one-word last line.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2013
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thx so much my dear - yes, pretty gorgeous! :)S
Comment from Lulube
Yep I got your vision in multi colored reading. A story to boot. Bet you drive by and look more often for that happy look?
lulube
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2013
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Yep I got your vision in multi colored reading. A story to boot. Bet you drive by and look more often for that happy look?
lulube
Comment Written 22-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2013
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I do indeed lulube! though it's not every day I actually "see" them! :))S
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But you did and now so did I.
lulube
